Topic: Unknown me
NicholasDDuncan's photo
Mon 08/15/11 05:31 PM
Edited by NicholasDDuncan on Mon 08/15/11 05:35 PM
I cant quiet express how I feel
Strangers in my life walk by
The words say to just deal
What do you do when love dies
The people we know pass before
A aching pain all the lingers
A battering ram crushing our door
What we are becomes a creature

A feeling that drops us to our knees
Crying internally trapt here
Leaving us begging please
The only thing of reality is a tear
A burden we cant seem to withstand
Will leave you to scream
I dont want to be this man

When the desire for darkness is all the ramains
Whats left standing between me and it why should I restrain?


Ive lost alot this year, my father, my mother, both to suicide. I lost my fiancee and two kids and Im left with nothing but this internally explosive feeling. How much more can one person take.

N.D.D. 8/01/2010 An exert from my private journal.

Sharris's photo
Mon 08/15/11 05:39 PM

I cant quiet express how I feel
Strangers in my life walk by
The words say to just deal
What do you do when love dies
The people we know pass before
A aching pain all the lingers
A battering ram crushing our door
What we are becomes a creature

A feeling that drops us to our knees
Crying internally trapt here
Leaving us begging please
The only thing of reality is a tear
A burden we cant seem to withstand
Will leave you to scream
I dont want to be this man

When the desire for darkness is all the ramains
Whats left standing between me and it why should I restrain?


Ive lost alot this year, my father, my mother, both to suicide. I lost my fiancee and two kids and Im left with nothing but this internally explosive feeling. How much more can one person take.

N.D.D. 8/01/2010 An exert from my private journal.

I don't know what to say, but the feelings wrench a pain for you. Sometimes just opening up a bit helps. Poetry is a good way. Hope you come back and meet some of the folk here. some really wonderful that have become family. Welcome.

NicholasDDuncan's photo
Mon 08/15/11 05:40 PM
I do try. Just NOT always easy to stay positive.

laura329's photo
Mon 08/15/11 07:25 PM
Hi Nicholas...I feel your pain in your words. I am so very sorry for all that you have lost. There is not one of us on here who doesn't have a story. But nobody's story is worse than our own. there's no judgements or criticism here. You're safe here. Let your mind go and voice what you need to without worry. If that's what you want. Welcome to our "Poetry Forum". It's filled with great writers, friends and some are our listeners. waving

winterblue56's photo
Mon 08/15/11 07:32 PM

I cant quiet express how I feel
Strangers in my life walk by
The words say to just deal
What do you do when love dies
The people we know pass before
A aching pain all the lingers
A battering ram crushing our door
What we are becomes a creature

A feeling that drops us to our knees
Crying internally trapt here
Leaving us begging please
The only thing of reality is a tear
A burden we cant seem to withstand
Will leave you to scream
I dont want to be this man

When the desire for darkness is all the ramains
Whats left standing between me and it why should I restrain?


Ive lost alot this year, my father, my mother, both to suicide. I lost my fiancee and two kids and Im left with nothing but this internally explosive feeling. How much more can one person take.

N.D.D. 8/01/2010 An exert from my private journal.


May God give your soul and heart comfort. It's at the bottom where we begin to find our place in this world and with our Creator. I'm heartfelt sorry for all your losses. ((Hugs)) flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 08/15/11 08:43 PM
There is so much I could say here but I will leave it at this.

You are felt. You are seen. You are understood. And you are embraced.


flowerforyou

NicholasDDuncan's photo
Mon 08/15/11 11:44 PM
Well ty all. I want to be clear in now way was I looking for pitty, I simply find it interesting to look at how I feel at times.

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 08/16/11 12:14 AM
Acknowledgement of one's humanity isn't pity. I am constantly awed by the human spirit and the courage that is sometimes necessary to face each day. I see the strength in it and am inspired.