try me

I am tried

justified


what is try?

a lack of
conviction

prediction

suspicion

it’s a no

that you lack the
balls to show

or a yes

in distress
under duress

latest conquest
with breasts

yes

just do it

your worst
your best

something
that says


I was here
and I
didn’t try

anything



I did it

I didn’t


pass or fail
you aren’t frail

no test
of the righteous

no try

stupefy

magnify

the drive

the thrive

the immeasurable
side that knows

the woes
of the no’s

the zest
of the yes

try
if you must

and while
you
are trying

he is yessing
all over
my
successing

ahhh, there you are

Nice write....

Fantastic ArtGurl...

Thank you ((Tazz)) ((Up2))((Ainjel))

((((Kev))))


I haven't written anything for a loooooooong time ... I need to scrub the rust off.

Thank you for reading and for your comments

I must admit your poem has me thinking. Very exhilarating to my mind.

I could very much hear this as a good beat poem. WELL DONE!

hotitalian - thanks very much

Bushi - nice to see you. Thank you for reading and for your comments. I appreciate it!

Yes Man says Yes!

Reading between the lines,
I see that truth which shines.
Makes me want to jump out of this page..
Life is a statement, living is an example,
Success shall always be hidden from failure.

Hugs and much Love Art,,,and its truly VERY COOL to read YOU here again,,, and in a light that really makes you sparkle.....

Nice one ArtGurl . . . really nice

Don't try, just do it !!!

(((s1ow))) Yes ... you


(T)) Thank you for gracing the page


((Mig))) I appreciate you stopping by ... truly


(((R))) in every moment of every day ...

Very nice to read you again

Lovely to see you Pam - thank you for stopping by and taking the time

Very nice. I felt myself moving along with it word for word, break for break.

Thank you so much winterblue

That poem took my mind for a nice jog :)
Loved It and i expect to love whatever you write Artgurl

Thank you so much Al