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A Walk in the Sand
It was a beautiful easy moment fair skies a cloudless blue and a hand in hand discovery of the beaches warm sand Silence accompanied the journey though there were several thoughts . . . all centered on you It was a beautiful easy moment where time stood still while we continued on our journey receding waves and seagull chatter walked with us A quick peek found us eye to eye and I wondered do you know just how I feel about you you smiled I smiled I guess we both know |
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Mon 08/08/11 06:30 AM
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Nice write, tranquil, beautiful.....
It seems I only write about heartache, death, destruction. My Ending would have been a shark attack, lighting strike, or the four horsemen of the apocalypse. Would show up running us over....  I'm so twisted.....
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As always Mig, another fab write..
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Very peaceful..makes me want to visit the beach!
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Nice write, tranquil, beautiful.....
It seems I only write about heartache, death, destruction. My Ending would have been a shark attack, lighting strike, or the four horsemen of the apocalypse. Would show up running us over.... I'm so twisted.....
You know Up2Us I was going for the peaceful romantic moment thing here . . . but who knows, I may try that twisted thing once. Hmm, I think a lightning strike may have been the most twisted I could get. |
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