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bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 07/15/11 10:03 AM
~ across the ocean, this picture was taken by poppashroom. i added the words. a worldly collaboration. please give us some feedbacks!!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 07/15/11 10:07 AM
I do indeed like both the picture and the poem. Both of you connected with a art form. Spring and summer comes forth, so does love. I like it very much.

Dict8 Joined Tue 11/24/09 Posts: 7822	Fri 07/15/11 10:09 AM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Fri 07/15/11 10:15 AM
I love x x

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 07/15/11 10:30 AM
Beautiful collaboration...

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 07/15/11 10:41 AM Edited by bastet126 on Fri 07/15/11 10:53 AM
tazz, through the eyes of another, thank you for that!! dict 8, a flower for flower.... thank you! always, thank you ainjel poppashroom, take your bow, it's a beautiful shot x x

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 07/15/11 10:50 AM
tazz, through the eyes of another, thank you for that!! a flower for flower.... thank you! always, thank you ainjel poppashroom, take your bow, it's a beautiful shot x x As with all of your poems, that touch me in one way or another. I do indeed thank you dear lady.

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Fri 07/15/11 12:30 PM
tazz, through the eyes of another, thank you for that!! dict 8, a flower for flower.... thank you! always, thank you ainjel poppashroom, take your bow, it's a beautiful shot x x Bow, your words made the picture x

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 07/15/11 01:15 PM
Love the poem & background picture. I would change the color of the Fonts to yellow. It may make the wording easier to read.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Sat 07/16/11 05:28 AM
This is poetry at its finest. This is what we strive to create.

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sat 07/16/11 06:01 AM
i'm proud to work with bastet, she has a beautiful mind.

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 07/16/11 08:02 AM
tazz ~ thank you again, we know where the writes come from within us, we never know where it might take another, it means much when it reaches. Up2Us ~ it is a faint yellow, if only poppashroom had not captured the sun so perfectly, lol. but, yes, i agree, if printed out and larger doesn't help, i may have to cave on that and change it. thank you mig ~ and you do, every time i read you poppashroom, me too, you too!! thank you all again for taking the time to read and letting us know what you think!!!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 07/16/11 10:43 AM
It nibbles on every tip of my tongue as for saying,,its beautiful,,and very COOLEY DONE!!!

laura329 Joined Tue 10/13/09 Posts: 112	Sat 07/16/11 12:49 PM
I wish I could write like you. no matter how hard I try-I always end up having to have it rhyme. You write beautifully

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 07/17/11 12:24 AM
Beautiful collaboration!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 07/17/11 09:56 AM
<------- apropos, don't ya think?

Chrispm84 Joined Mon 07/11/11 Posts: 46	Mon 07/18/11 02:00 AM
Very nice guys, very nice indeed!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 07/18/11 10:42 AM
gracias all!! taking time to read and SEE and comment, means much to us! iam4u ~ cooley that you think cooley!! your feedback is always appreciated!! laura ~ wow, thank you so much, i try to rhyme, from time to time, but i've lost, or maybe found, my way in free form. love your writes too! artgurl ~ thank you!! kc ~ <-- quid pro quo :) chris ~ very nice of you too!