Topic: ~ knife of leaving
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Wed 06/08/11 10:19 AM
one hand
holds the knife of leaving

one fingertip
against my lips

red drip
on the knife of leaving

with each swallow
i eat a bite of my heart

knife of leaving
unsheathed in my eyes

bastet126's photo
Wed 06/08/11 02:52 PM
flowerforyou

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Wed 06/08/11 03:16 PM
WOW :cry:

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Wed 06/08/11 05:42 PM
Nice....smokin

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Thu 06/09/11 12:19 AM
Very nice..

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Fri 06/10/11 11:28 AM
pleases me when you read and write something.....teasingbrunette..flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 06/10/11 02:27 PM
Heartfelt :heart:

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 06/11/11 08:32 PM
Potent imagery flowerforyou

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Sat 06/11/11 08:36 PM

one hand
holds the knife of leaving

one fingertip
against my lips

red drip
on the knife of leaving

with each swallow
i eat a bite of my heart

knife of leaving
unsheathed in my eyes

Very feeling in its depths and the few words,ADD to its delight
as we get to draw more from them i our minds....
I like this much...flowerforyou

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Sun 06/12/11 08:05 AM
flowerforyou
thankyou for the great comments...

kc0003's photo
Sun 06/12/11 09:57 PM
wonderful piece....flowerforyou

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Tue 06/14/11 12:55 PM
kc...generous you...

Sharris's photo
Thu 06/16/11 07:22 AM
intensely creative, potent. You have such an ability to say so much in so few words.

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Fri 06/17/11 12:39 PM
Sadie,thankyou....it's my 'way' of writing.......teasingbrunette

Zimzane's photo
Fri 06/17/11 12:42 PM
laugh

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Fri 06/17/11 12:44 PM
to clarify..i meant the few words part....ugh.

Sharris's photo
Fri 06/17/11 01:09 PM

Sadie,thankyou....it's my 'way' of writing.......teasingbrunette

I truly admire that.

Teditis's photo
Sat 06/18/11 10:25 AM
Wow... all the warmth of feelings, in that.
As well as the coldness of the blade.
Very nice.
flowerforyou

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Sun 06/19/11 02:35 PM
Sadie......that's a lovely thing to write.


Teditis..........pleased you wrote.


teasingbrunette