Topic: ~ knife of leaving | |
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one hand
holds the knife of leaving one fingertip against my lips red drip on the knife of leaving with each swallow i eat a bite of my heart knife of leaving unsheathed in my eyes |
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WOW
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Nice....
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Very nice..
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pleases me when you read and write something.....teasingbrunette..
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Heartfelt
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Potent imagery
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one hand holds the knife of leaving one fingertip against my lips red drip on the knife of leaving with each swallow i eat a bite of my heart knife of leaving unsheathed in my eyes as we get to draw more from them i our minds.... I like this much... |
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thankyou for the great comments... |
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wonderful piece....
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kc...generous you...
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intensely creative, potent. You have such an ability to say so much in so few words.
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Sadie,thankyou....it's my 'way' of writing.......teasingbrunette
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to clarify..i meant the few words part....ugh.
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Sadie,thankyou....it's my 'way' of writing.......teasingbrunette I truly admire that. |
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Wow... all the warmth of feelings, in that.
As well as the coldness of the blade. Very nice. |
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Sadie......that's a lovely thing to write.
Teditis..........pleased you wrote. teasingbrunette |
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