Topic: Those Words
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Thu 07/05/07 12:23 PM
How do I say the words
The words that get stuck in my throat
It is not that they aren't true
I am just so scared to say them
How do I say the words
Those words I am afraid to say
That may just push you further away
So I swallow them whole
Keep them down
Hidden away
Waiting for that day
When I can finally say
I love you....

When I am no longer afraid
When they won't push you further away
But until that day comes
I will drift upon my cloud
Looking down
Thinking those words
Every time I see you
Feeling those words deep down in my soul
Knowing they will make us whole.

cancer715's photo
Thu 07/05/07 12:27 PM
Bravo!!!! I've been reading alot of poems lately, but this one really grabbed my attention. It was a pleasure reading it!!flowerforyou

sandylou2456's photo
Thu 07/05/07 12:28 PM

Beautiful CCP...Just Beautiful...flowerforyou

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Thu 07/05/07 12:40 PM
Bearifically beautiful once again CCP.I've notice alot more personal expression lately and I think it is fantastic,I luv it very much sweetheart.There awaits a very lucky man out there somewhere who does not know this yet,so I truly hope that he discovers this knowledge.Perhaps he may see through some hints in your writing or even from Katie's fab idea she whipped up,that's providing U are in the submittable pool.ttyl/hon.Godspeed!Cybear;=)((((bear~hug)))
:tongue: flowerforyou blushing

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Thu 07/05/07 01:05 PM
flowerforyou Awwwww g/f you have amazed me once again
with your words that flow so sweetly upon the page.

When the time comes that these words you so desire to
reveal to that special one. And in return you find out
all along that is all he ever wanted to hear like sweet
music to his ears. That will be the day the Rose will
start to open those petals for the world to see.
flowerforyou bigsmile

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Thu 07/05/07 06:39 PM
(((((Ms Poet))))
When the time is right the words will flow from your heart and soul and reach thier destination with open arms,,,

Beautiful Piece indeed,,, flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Thu 07/05/07 06:40 PM
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bigsmile