Topic: When I see him smile
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Thu 07/05/07 10:36 AM


The sunlight fades
and my grey world looks bright
my heart starts to flutter
and everything seems right.


His smile makes me stutter
and eyes make me melt
just to remember
what it is i felt.

When the world looks gloomy
when i feel i can't go on
I look at his smile
and know that life will go on.

So dont ever stop
looking at me that way
and please baby please
be here to stay!!!

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Thu 07/05/07 10:41 AM
i know, i know, pretty cheesy. lol, definitely not my best work.

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Thu 07/05/07 10:41 AM
I m here relax :tongue:

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Thu 07/05/07 10:47 AM
laugh laugh laugh

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Thu 07/05/07 10:48 AM
very heart felt poem btw :smile:

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Thu 07/05/07 10:48 AM
awww, ty, i could have done better, guess i need to work on that, lol.

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Thu 07/05/07 10:50 AM
a few kisses and spankings you ll be back to norm in no time laugh laugh laugh laugh

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Thu 07/05/07 10:51 AM
laugh laugh laugh

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Thu 07/05/07 10:56 AM
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Thu 07/05/07 11:11 AM
Hi!S~P~S.I enjoyed this very much.When words come directly from a woman's heart they are emotionally felt.There is no cheesy factor lying within this poem.Not from perspective anyhow.Please keep writing K.(((bear~hug)))Godspeed!Cybear;=):tongue: flowerforyou blushing

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Thu 07/05/07 11:14 AM
Awwwww so sweet the way love can make one feelbigsmile flowerforyou