Topic: The Traveling Soul
pl9864's photo
Tue 07/03/07 09:30 PM
Okay I love to write so I'll leave it up to you to decide whether I'm any good.


I travel in this world all alone,
Trying desperately to find a place of my own.
Where judgements never passed and love flows freely,
And respecting one's heart happens...ideally.
Where I'm unashamed of showing who I truly am,
Emotional,caring,and soft..but yet still a man.
The fire in my eyes is still dimly lit,
I'll try to hold on for "another" little bit.
My soul travels daily my heart follows a step behind,
Maybe I'm asking of too much to find.
A gentle heart that understands reciprocity,
and values commitment.....obviously.
Someone to walk beside me neither in front of nor behind,
Whose personality speaks volumes and shows they're one of a kind.
Outer beauty would be nice but "plain Jane" would do just fine,
I'm sure that it will happen it's just a matter of time.
Until that day my soul travels on,
Hoping and praying it doesn't take too long.
I've been patient thus far and will continue to be,
Because when the time's right I'll have someone who will love me for me.

Okay there you go.Hope everyone liked it.Just a small glimpse into my world.Thanks for reading it.

LAMom's photo
Tue 07/03/07 09:43 PM
I will say this is Really nice,,, Hope to see more from you
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa flowerforyou

pl9864's photo
Tue 07/03/07 09:47 PM
Thanks LAmom I truly appreciate.I've been writing for about 15 years,I just don't share a lot.flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 07/03/07 09:55 PM
flowerforyou Awwww very nice you should truly
write more often thanks for sharing.flowerforyou

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Tue 07/03/07 09:58 PM
Please do share more of your work, I really enjoyed reading this piece.

pl9864's photo
Tue 07/03/07 10:00 PM
Thank you all so much.I truly am humbled by the responses posted.I write a lot about my emotions and let downs.I'm a very sensitive man I don't tell a lot of people(guess I just did).I will post more though.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

pl9864's photo
Tue 07/03/07 10:02 PM
Poet i've read some of your poems and you're a very good writer.Maybe someday you can let me in on your secret.

Dayv's photo
Tue 07/03/07 10:09 PM
Good read pl, i enjoyed, keep postin' them...thx!:smile:

pl9864's photo
Tue 07/03/07 10:15 PM
Thanks Dayv I appreciate it.

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 07/03/07 10:16 PM
Thank you flowerforyou

pl9864's photo
Tue 07/03/07 10:28 PM
You're truly welcome.I'm just a hopeless romantic on the inside of this somewhat rough exterior.

s1owhand's photo
Wed 07/04/07 02:23 AM
drinker bigsmile

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Wed 07/04/07 05:07 AM
Happy 4th of July P~L.Great read indeed.Please refer back to my Poem"Of Rarest Beauty"K,I left a mess.there for U.I'm pleased to meet U by the way.Keep writing K.Godspeed!Cybear;=):tongue: flowerforyou glasses

Puffins1958's photo
Wed 07/04/07 05:38 AM
Preston...

Morning hon. It was beautiful, thank you so much for sharing it with us. Let me know, please, when you post more. I would love to read it.

-Joanne flowerforyou