I'm just playing with some song lyrics ... incomplete ... not sure whether to scrap it entirely or keep working it ... suggestions welcome from all of you uber talented writers




He sat with her for days and weeks
her body weak, the sorrow deep
through misty eyes and tear stained cheeks
he fakes a smile and strokes her face

and sighs


I have always loved you
through the good times and the bad
to see you every morning
made me thank God I'm your man

And I don't have to tell you
that I've always been a fool
losing track of what's important
and breaking every rule



A single tear escapes her eye
and rolls off to the side
the doctor said a coma
but inside she is alive

She hears every word he says
as she struggles to reply
not a single word escapes her
but there was a blink in her eyes


I have always loved you
was her silent heartfelt reply
I don't regret a thing
not a moment of you and I

Our life was what I wanted
and I'm proud to be your wife
please watch over the children
make sure they have a good life



Her breath grew short and shallow
as he held her in his arms
It's okay to go my love
you've earned your place among the stars

The brightest light in the sky
that's where you said you'd be
so I'll look for you each night
and I hope you'll guide my way


I have always loved you
and I can't believe it ends this way
we've had quite a journey
and I'll love you all my days

Sweet sleep my precious angel
Go see your family and your friends
I'll be along shortly dear
My heart is with you til the end


As he held her hand
and stroked her hair
her last breath
came and went...


I have always loved you
through the good times and the bad
and every day I saw your face
made me thank God I'm your man

and I don't have to tell you
that I've always been a fool....



Through misty eyes
and tear stained cheeks
he fakes a smile
and strokes her face

Keep working it..It is beautiful...

Ooooooo, arrow the heart....

Very nice

The title itself finds indescribable meaning in what seems to be a heartless world at times...



I wish I could successfully process what I believe to be the source of this heartfelt writing, but all I can offer is confidence in your unique ability to cut pretty shapes out of a cardboard box and seemingly turn nothing into everything special.

Touching so many, so often...

That's beautiful!

Thank you everyone ... it is just the first draft and pieces of this still really bug me ... I'll keep working to see if I can resolve it

I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment

Great!!

I hear country?

wonderful write

beautiful sentiments-you'll get it figured out

Very sad write, a lost love, a lost life, memories of a beautiful time,
Michael

I it.

Thank you all




That is interesting Gossip ... it isn't country in my head but it certainly could be

It is evolving

do not stop working this

you will find it

I think it is good Art

I will not let you go my love, not before I am sure.
Sure that this is your time to leave.
Holding your hand, stroking your sweet gentle cheek.
I feel your words inside, trying to break free.
Waiting, Praying, for you to open your eyes once more.
Reading to you everyday, your past love letters sent to me.
Hoping, through my tear filled eyes, that one word will wake.
Do not fear my darling. I will never leave your side.
GOD shall be the only one, to ever take my place.

See if this might make some spark to your darkness, wink,,

Great write, Sherrie...

Sherrie, you are so gifted,, I know in my heart that what ever you touch, feel or see is taken into your Soul and from within you produce magic,, as in this write, heartfelt, pure and deep
let the grove and flow pull you towards completion,,,

Bravo,, I miss your seeing your Soul upon paper