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it is the way she carries herself she walks like dancing and dances like making love in her eyes is a mobile dangling jewels illuminated from within they glitter like droplets of lava hanging suspended in time in my memory a volcano when she fountains everything burns there is nothing left no earth no sky only emptiness two souls which smolder |
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Nice write....
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H- very, very nice
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Always enjoy,nice to see you
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*shiver*
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Thanks everyone for reading!
tanyaann, up2us, pkd, pkh, and ag |
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Edited by
Gossipmpm
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Sat 01/09/10 03:39 PM
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OOOOO Baby I like......I like!!!!
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and Gossipmpm
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"it is the way
she carries herself she walks like dancing and dances like making love in her eyes is a mobile dangling jewels illuminated from within" Gorgeous, and evocative description ... lovely... |
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That was pretty fast, slow,,,,
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T, you have to save it for the last "poetry reading" of the night! |
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T, you have to save it for the last "poetry reading" of the night! |
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Did someone just have sex...
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nice write
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By all recognition,
she was his dame. oooofh |
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Thank you also Noden, cherie, Sadie
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