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Edited by
writer_gurl
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Sun 12/27/09 07:39 PM
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Silence Unbound
Silence unabashed it is me that it is found How long will it last Silence follows me Wrapping me in its presence I am what it seeks as I pray for deliverance Silence cuts like a knife and fits like a glove Silence had trapped me in a dark night Uncapable of love Silence tangles in knots Silence tears the unbreakable It embraces me in a lock Silence hushes the unspeakable Silence has a grip cold as ice Enveloping me in a blanket Silence makes me want to hide trembling, how long can I take it Silence lingers Silence follows When it captures Silence makes you hollow |
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I especially liked the part where it cuts like a knife and fits like a glove. Very artistically written.
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remember the saying, a child should be seen and not heard, I imagine that's why many of us write......this brought back many memories, I never uttered more than two words when I was a tad pole, then when someone told me it was ok to speak, I went crazy with conversation, now that same person tells me to shut up already...lol
Enjoyed this, silence is golden, but like the aftermath of rain (tears), belongs at the end of a rainbow.... |
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