Topic: Ice Cometh
Sharris's photo
Thu 12/24/09 06:26 AM
Ice Cometh

The ice came.
Slicked over everything
that had surface.
No matter how warm
one keeps them self,
when it's gonna freeze,
the wind has no choice,
but to relinquish to design.
Throws you a bit off kilter.
Your balance takes
a moment to compensate.
Pretty soon, though,
you are skating,
sliding through, as you laugh
when you plop down
hard on your posterior.
No choice in this one.
It is really cold.
So, did I tell you?
The ice came?

Raine Les 12/24/2009

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 12/24/09 08:26 AM
is there any subject you don't write about, I wonder who was laughing last at this part

sliding through, as you laugh
when you plop down
hard on your posterior...lol

nice

Sharris's photo
Thu 12/24/09 09:10 AM

is there any subject you don't write about, I wonder who was laughing last at this part

sliding through, as you laugh
when you plop down
hard on your posterior...lol

nice

I would say that writing is conversation for a woman
that was not often heard, and wondered her worth. I love to write. I have always been a bit different in the way I think..now I have credibility to say it.

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 12/24/09 09:20 AM
Edited by HuckleberryFinn on Thu 12/24/09 09:21 AM
so basically what you're saying is women don't just have to smell nice and look demure anymore, they can speak as well....Long live feminine right....lmao

there used to be a time when women would get beheaded for speaking too much, now it's essential that that head be good and mouthy....my my how times have changed I still remember the ole virginia slims commercials, "you've come a long way baby"......too funny

Sharris's photo
Thu 12/24/09 09:29 AM

so basically what you're saying is women don't just have to smell nice and look demure anymore, they can speak as well....Long live feminine right....lmao

there used to be a time when women would get beheaded for speaking too much, now it's essential that that head be good and mouthy....my my how times have changed I still remember the ole virginia slims commercials, "you've come a long way baby"......too funny


I speak only for myself, and my desire has always been to smell nice and care demurely..the cloth of a this woman is but a layer to be discovered.

no photo
Thu 12/24/09 09:41 AM
bitter winds makes better writing
flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Thu 12/24/09 09:43 AM

bitter winds makes better writing
flowerforyou


very good, How's the weather? In Washington?

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Thu 12/24/09 10:50 PM
dreadful lol