Topic: Killing me softly
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Wed 12/16/09 06:18 AM
Killing me softly

rose petaled hands caress infant cheeks
soothing echoes from memory speak
of whispered lullabys about the moon
while fragmented winds carried thy tune

a sound distorted
as time goes on
I ache to behold thee
but thou hast gone

my heart has grown bitter from such a loss
for what is christmas without the frost
we exchange the gift of life for death
lest we be thankful for another breath

yet the air is stale
and the stench is costly
my soul erodes
killing me softly.....

For her memory

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Wed 12/16/09 06:20 AM
just beautiful...

the longing of what was acutely felt

Sharris's photo
Wed 12/16/09 06:31 AM
Edited by Sharris on Wed 12/16/09 06:31 AM
rose petaled hands caressing
a beautiful description


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Wed 12/16/09 07:34 AM
lifes tragedies...misfortunes.....precious charms on our life bracelet


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Wed 12/16/09 09:49 PM
Very nice.
Loved the second half especially.

"my heart has grown bitter from such a loss
for what is christmas without the frost"

Dig it.

sweetsimplesassy's photo
Wed 12/16/09 10:01 PM
very deep and heartfelt....

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Wed 12/16/09 10:33 PM
for her memory,,winkdrinker Nice write.

jimz's photo
Thu 12/17/09 09:48 AM
yeah i dug it too, professor H. Finn