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Killing me softly
rose petaled hands caress infant cheeks soothing echoes from memory speak of whispered lullabys about the moon while fragmented winds carried thy tune a sound distorted as time goes on I ache to behold thee but thou hast gone my heart has grown bitter from such a loss for what is christmas without the frost we exchange the gift of life for death lest we be thankful for another breath yet the air is stale and the stench is costly my soul erodes killing me softly..... For her memory |
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just beautiful...
the longing of what was acutely felt |
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Edited by
Sharris
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Wed 12/16/09 06:31 AM
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rose petaled hands caressing
a beautiful description |
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lifes tragedies...misfortunes.....precious charms on our life bracelet
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Very nice.
Loved the second half especially. "my heart has grown bitter from such a loss for what is christmas without the frost" Dig it. |
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very deep and heartfelt....
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for her memory,,wink Nice write.
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yeah i dug it too, professor H. Finn
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