Topic: Suffer No More
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 11/09/09 06:26 AM
Suffer No More

Desolate slabs, gloomy grey
epitaphic wit, words of the day
seedy grass upon mounds slanted
scattered flowers, unplanted

cascading tears of mourning dew
await the sun to shine through
remembering life, through death
as we recall a memorable last breath

a tree rustles from a winded spirit
slightly faint, did you hear it
an echo from flesh we came to know
voices our hearts won't let go

upon this pain, I've been a slave
yet freedom awaits, within the grave.


May777's photo
Mon 11/09/09 06:50 AM
:cry: an absolute beauty flowerforyou


Sharris's photo
Mon 11/09/09 06:50 AM

Suffer No More

Desolate slabs, gloomy grey
epitaphic wit, words of the day
seedy grass upon mounds slanted
scattered flowers, unplanted

cascading tears of mourning dew
await the sun to shine through
remembering life, through death
as we recall a memorable last breath

a tree rustles from a winded spirit
slightly faint, did you hear it
an echo from flesh we came to know
voices our hearts won't let go

upon this pain, I've been a slave
yet freedom awaits, within the grave.



one could relate this season, autumn, death in all its glory, to be covered over by cold and colder still, to gift a seeds growth. Yes, this brought thoughts to be thankful.

jimz's photo
Mon 11/09/09 07:00 AM
awesome

no photo
Mon 11/09/09 07:58 AM
brilliantdrinker

Ladylid2012's photo
Mon 11/09/09 08:03 AM
:cry: beautiful

no photo
Mon 11/09/09 09:04 AM
feeling all of this-thank you flowerforyou flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 11/09/09 09:24 AM
An excellent read happy

no photo
Mon 11/09/09 10:22 AM
drinker flowers

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 11/09/09 02:54 PM
I've read this from several angles. Now if I can just shut my subconscious thoughts off, well perfect timing for me is what I mean. Thanks for posting.

no photo
Mon 11/09/09 07:49 PM
Through twilights of dispair,
memories turn ambers into tiny spirits dancing in my mind. Displacing sorrowed times once felt, into a new day to melt.

Great write man,,,and so felt here by many,,,,cheersdrinker

May777's photo
Wed 11/11/09 05:31 AM
this would be a beautiful poem to read for Remembrance Day flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Wed 11/11/09 05:35 AM
beautiful

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Wed 11/11/09 05:42 AM

brilliantdrinker
I agree....smokin

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 11/11/09 05:44 AM
:heart: