Topic: Last Word
ArtGurl's photo
Thu 10/01/09 12:05 PM
A fall chill creeps through the cracks
Of a heart that once knew
The joy of your laughter

Your eyes

In them

I see me


I turn away like the coward I am
I can’t let you see me

Broken



Everything I need to say
Is in my chest
Unable to move

I love you

Please don’t go

How do I do this without you



How sad that you remember
all the things you did wrong
When I remember all the things

We

Did

Right



Here you are
Struggling to breathe
And I am struggling to not

Choking
on every word
I cannot say
For fear it is
My
Last


:heart:

pkh's photo
Thu 10/01/09 12:12 PM
good write...hugs

Jess642's photo
Thu 10/01/09 03:00 PM
oh.....



:cry:

mcgilvrey21's photo
Thu 10/01/09 03:36 PM
wow!!!!
chilling.
very good.

s1owhand's photo
Thu 10/01/09 04:19 PM
:heart: (((Sherrie))) :heart:

~ very beautiful my lovely ~

thinking of you...

jimz's photo
Thu 10/01/09 10:40 PM
flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Fri 10/02/09 06:47 AM
Love how this was formatted its echos reverberated unto the core of many a soul that has come to the realization that what once promised bliss, now only brings pain......awesome

no photo
Fri 10/02/09 07:03 AM
this hit me to the core...very moving

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 10/02/09 11:40 PM
flowerforyou pkh

flowerforyou Jess

flowerforyou McG

flowerforyou s1ow

flowerforyou Jimz

flowerforyou Huck

flowerforyou pkd



Thank you for reading and for your comments. You are like a warm blanket ... :heart:

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/02/09 11:42 PM
i want to be a blanket too...

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 10/02/09 11:43 PM

i want to be a blanket too...



you always are my friend :heart:

sagacious22's photo
Fri 10/02/09 11:45 PM
very nice!flowerforyou

Ladylid2012's photo
Fri 10/02/09 11:52 PM
flowers (((Sherrie)))

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 10/03/09 12:03 PM
flowerforyou sag

flowerforyou ((Lady))



Thank you :heart:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 10/03/09 12:16 PM
smooched passes a fresh roll of TP (sorry, outta puffs)flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 10/03/09 12:24 PM

smooched passes a fresh roll of TP (sorry, outta puffs)flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou



awww thanks gf ...:heart: