Topic: Your Scent
writer_gurl's photo
Wed 09/02/09 10:34 AM
Flowing on the wind
the scent of you
back when my life was never dim
or different shades of blue

The scent of you
still haunts me
old things seem new
touching your possesions It is you I see

It is your scent
that makes me wonder
why is your image so fluent
and lock me into the spell I'm under

Your scent lingers
every where I go
I swear I can feel your fingers
they were always gentle and slow

People always look at me
with sadness and pity
But sometimes it is you I see
and this life so gray is so pretty

It is not only your scent
It is your smile
it is the warmth you always leant
and the passion we had for awhile

it was the way you touched me
It was the the way we talked
It was only me you see
it was the way we cuddled and walked

Your scent is starting to fade
Like a gentle breeze
but you always have your ways
to stay with me


Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/02/09 10:41 AM
Soft, gently stirring mmmmm-nicely done, writer......flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Wed 09/02/09 10:43 AM
Very smooth...A+

mig25's photo
Wed 09/02/09 12:19 PM
It touches me. I enjoyed this piece very much.

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/02/09 12:20 PM
flowerforyou

kalunda's photo
Wed 09/02/09 04:48 PM
flowerforyou well done:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 09/03/09 05:47 PM
Awww like a gentle breeze that touches ones heart the scent that lingers behind along with the memories of yesterday.......bigsmile