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Flowing on the wind
the scent of you back when my life was never dim or different shades of blue The scent of you still haunts me old things seem new touching your possesions It is you I see It is your scent that makes me wonder why is your image so fluent and lock me into the spell I'm under Your scent lingers every where I go I swear I can feel your fingers they were always gentle and slow People always look at me with sadness and pity But sometimes it is you I see and this life so gray is so pretty It is not only your scent It is your smile it is the warmth you always leant and the passion we had for awhile it was the way you touched me It was the the way we talked It was only me you see it was the way we cuddled and walked Your scent is starting to fade Like a gentle breeze but you always have your ways to stay with me |
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Soft, gently stirring mmmmm-nicely done, writer......
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Very smooth...A+
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It touches me. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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well done
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Awww like a gentle breeze that touches ones heart the scent that lingers behind along with the memories of yesterday.......
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