I wrote this today after having a nice dream this morning. This is meant to be a lyric.

Don't you hate it
When you wake up to the dawn
To find your dream
Disappeared and seeming so far gone?

There I was
In the midst of such bliss
To awaken and find
It was just a dream like kiss

I want to sleep
Cover my head and slumber off
I want to sleep
Dream again up in the loft

I want to see
See this lover who seemed true
Kiss him once again
That's what I want to do

Don't you hate it
When your happier asleep
Lost in some dream land
Where your heart and mind both meet

For a moment
You are totally off guard
Feeling peace in slumberville
A happier place by far

I want to sleep
Cover my head and slumber off
I want to sleep
Dream again up in my loft

I want to dream
Of the times that are to come
Reality just stinks right now
I want to be with my true love

Aug 11, 2009 SDF

That's a different style of lyric, I tend to experiment with writing styles a lot. Don't tend to see many lyrics written in this form, usually the chorus parts are put together to form a long stanza. I like the feeling, the writing is well done, and structure wise it is really easy to read and follow.

Nice job with this one.

"I want to be with my true love"----Me too me too.....Well done Myst.

good to see you back writting,nice job

I have not slept for a long time.
If I could sleep like this, sublime.
Awaking with that kiss so real
Living, knowing more than feel..

beautiful...
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