Mounting tension as storm clouds gather
Air filled with excitement as the storm brews
Thunder crashing in the distance speeds his heart with anticipation
Lightning flashing across the sky between her eyes and his
Filling his soul with anxiousness
Sun shining from her face and into his eyes
Taking a moment he glares at the sun's beauty and smiles back
Staring into the eyes of the storm, his heart gets struck by lightning
Electricity fills his body and flashes through his eyes into hers and
melts her heart
The storm is close as the thunder gets louder
Flashing lightning becomes more intense and targeted
Giving in to temptation, his mouth searches for hers through closed eyes
Graciously accepting his invitation, the two engage in a kiss that
ignites the soul, setting it on fire
The lightning intensifies as their unbridled passion reaches fever pitch
and the storm is at hand
Lost in the middle of the storm, caught unprepared for the downpour of
passion as their bodies become drenched with sweat and the passionate
rain
The storm is upon them, lightning flashes continuously from his eyes to
hers
The sound of thunder becomes deafening as their hearts race estatically
from the excitement that fills their souls
Loud booms of thunder from the frenzied storm as their bodies crash into
each other driving each other mad
Lost in time, the only realization is that the storm is passing
They look into each other's eyes as the last strike of lightning crashes
and their bodies collapse as the final crack of thunder rips through
their beings
A steady flow of rain drips off their bodies as the storm's end is here
They exchange a knowing glance
Smiling from the soul, they exchange a long slow kiss
Sheltering each other, they silently dream for the next storm

that is not your first...no way WILL

That's deep!

You know how to tell a great story.
You are funny and deep. You are multi-dimentional.

Hey Will no its not my first writting ,,its my first ever posting,,But
thanks all,,I try to keep my head clear,,so I thought how about a old
poem,,out of my pad that I use to write in,,,,,,just for yall,,got to
bring my self to post anothere one soon,,,I dont know,,I think they
suck,,its just me,,Love all yall here,,,,,,,

Cool I like your poem some how I knew you were very deep as well as
funny with your jokes keep it up my friend you have true talent:)

thank you all,,,,,,really thank u

hmmmm

nice work...love the detail

In some of my writing's I thought I got deep! This one makes me wanna go
find and old storm system of mine! So tell, spit who was/is this woman
that rocked your mind's eye. She your wife, lover, or just a storm
system that blew in, and rained out?

I like your poem a lot. Too bad that it is mine and already posted on
another site. I have the same username (justdifferent) on plentyoffish
and the thread titled "Are you strong enough to bleed" Thanks for liking
it enough that you wanted to claim it as yours.

good stuff man

lionsbrew-- If you are speaking to me. Thank you. Someone informed me
that several of poems were showing up here. I have about four hundred
more posted on my "Are you strong enough to bleed" thread on
plentyoffish. Since I now know of this site, I will probably post here
as well.

Justdifferent, so what poems of your have been"swiped"?

new he didnt wrote that..WILL