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Topic: Regret
d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 07/29/09 06:11 PM
At the broken point face of no return made an island out of bridges that were one too many burned a feeling that I felt could only lead to falling down If on a roll I want to know why I am balling now

maleah Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 324	Wed 07/29/09 06:12 PM
very good!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 07/29/09 06:13 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 07/29/09 06:25 PM
{{{d4tc}}}

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 07/29/09 08:29 PM
(((J)))

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 07/29/09 08:30 PM


Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Wed 07/29/09 08:33 PM
Awww...cheer up chipper monkey, great write too!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 07/29/09 08:38 PM
Sweet (((J)))

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 07/30/09 12:55 AM
Snicker, snicker, tee-hee, D4 a "chipper monkey" Ohhh, that's rich. I'm ta-try-------ING to compose my-ah-ha-choke-cough-mirth, sorry D4. I don't know why that amuses me so intensely. Good job on the write, gottaGO

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 07/30/09 10:14 AM
thank you dkw angel fusion pkh Sherrie Ms Teddy 2km maleah Chipper Monkey!

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Thu 07/30/09 10:51 AM
I love the way this reads and how it sounds when I read it out loud. Good write...

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Thu 07/30/09 10:52 AM
Good write!

writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Thu 07/30/09 11:56 AM
Very nice write

trgirl Joined Tue 01/20/09 Posts: 2368	Thu 07/30/09 11:58 AM

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