Topic: cold reflection
tb74's photo
Wed 05/20/09 01:01 PM
cold reflection
disjointed and turned
black dust
and lost
shimmering in the crevice
shiny sharp and pointed
for even years or even tears
the apex of significance
then tumult then turned
from the lofty yearned
and desires as fires
flamed and in fans drift
past auburn past rifts
and rumbling for roar
in the dusty bowl of yore
the tiny figurines
mute in metastasis
the read the verse or even worse
dotted the blue expanse
and dirty smoking trails
fell for head for long for so
this eager rupture then show
and up and stand that final hand
for brusque applaud for in for glint
and wrapped and tied
for certain find
and left and bereft befuddled then
there were stragglers among
far outreaching there were eminent specks
that in the shiny dust of speckled motes
danced in the sun beams and all
until the edge of night
fell across the scene

Bi_CurizGrl's photo
Wed 05/20/09 01:04 PM
Edited by Bi_CurizGrl on Wed 05/20/09 01:04 PM
wow...you ever heard of "I Never Promised You A Rose Garden"? It's a book and a movie, both of which I have...you write like the main character in it...absolutely eloquent...flowerforyou

redhead44613's photo
Wed 05/20/09 01:26 PM
wow that's good! flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 05/20/09 01:29 PM
:heart:

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 05/20/09 01:32 PM
Wonderful! Lovely to see you posting again! flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 05/20/09 06:59 PM
Very Cool Write..flowerforyou flowers drinker

Sharris's photo
Wed 05/20/09 07:12 PM

cold reflection
disjointed and turned
black dust
and lost
shimmering in the crevice
shiny sharp and pointed
for even years or even tears
the apex of significance
then tumult then turned
from the lofty yearned
and desires as fires
flamed and in fans drift
past auburn past rifts
and rumbling for roar
in the dusty bowl of yore
the tiny figurines
mute in metastasis
the read the verse or even worse
dotted the blue expanse
and dirty smoking trails
fell for head for long for so
this eager rupture then show
and up and stand that final hand
for brusque applaud for in for glint
and wrapped and tied
for certain find
and left and bereft befuddled then
there were stragglers among
far outreaching there were eminent specks
that in the shiny dust of speckled motes
danced in the sun beams and all
until the edge of night
fell across the scene

even hope gifts a glint.

AngelLight's photo
Thu 05/21/09 05:23 AM
Poignant ....good job tb! flowerforyou