Topic: Ballerina
Tuck4x4's photo
Fri 11/28/08 09:44 AM
Legs crossed, sitting on the floor.
I remember.
It was her smile.

Never mind her beauty.
Nevermind her style.

It was her laugh.

It was her glow that kept me,
that made me want to know.

Even then you were special.
Complex, I was always on my toes.

Just your skin, the glow within.
Just your lips, your hips,
your joyful grin.

Your arms, your legs,
your graceful back.
Your hair, so fine.
Your eyes, like mine.

All wonderful,
All beautiful.

All trivial.

Its your child-like dancing nature that makes you desireable.
Its your inquisitive little girl that makes you who you are.

Eyes wide, heart huge, voice filled with excitement.

I want more.

Independent and yet so dependent.
A graceful spirit pulls, pulls, pulls, like a magnet.

Your words never cease, they flow. Sometimes turbulent, sometimes peaceful.
Always a window.

Sharp tongue belies soft heart.
Hardened by choice,
softened despite it.

Which is you? I think I know.

I remember you, you make me break things.
I dream to repair what Ive broken.

Give me your heart.

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 11/28/08 11:38 AM
I absolutely love the imagery, flow and emotion in this ... so beautiful and a pleasure to read... flowerforyou

enderra's photo
Fri 11/28/08 11:41 AM
Nice, I think it is two poems though!?flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 11/28/08 12:06 PM
Wonderful flow when reading, I really enjoyed your words.flowerforyou flowerforyou

Tuck4x4's photo
Fri 11/28/08 08:39 PM
Thank you very much. Im a photographer. Writing is something that I've never really tried before.

Tuck4x4's photo
Tue 12/02/08 12:11 PM
I was wondering what you meant by two poems?