Topic: "Silent Cries"
lovemeifyoucan26's photo
Thu 10/02/08 03:54 PM
have you ever felt something
that only a true heart can bring,
have you ever known a love
that knows what your'e thinking of,
one that will break your fall
even if it costs him his all,
one that tries so hard to provide your needs
broken hearted when he can't,falling to his knees,
tired and sore at the end of everyday
yet, still not enough to pay the way,
do you acknowledge how hard he tries
or pay attention to the silent cries,
of a man who knows not, what else to do
other than tell you how much he loves you.

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Not really fancy, or spectaculr in any way...again just off the top of my head just now..just wrote as it flowed through..
meaning is in it though..

no photo
Thu 10/02/08 04:03 PM
This is great....and sadly have never experienced anyone caring that much...thank you for the dreamflowerforyou

lovemeifyoucan26's photo
Thu 10/02/08 04:13 PM

This is great....and sadly have never experienced anyone caring that much...thank you for the dreamflowerforyou


I think it must be a dream to me too..I have not had the oppritunity to be this man for someone deserving of it at this time....

Thank you for responding....

liltazz's photo
Thu 10/02/08 04:20 PM
Very nice. Never had that, but one can always dream. flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/02/08 06:00 PM
I thought at one time I had found that kind of love but then I found out it was but a passing thing. good onebigsmile

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 10/02/08 08:17 PM
Not really fancy, or spectaculr in any way...again just off the top of my head just now..just wrote as it flowed through..
meaning is in it though..



I liked it better before the disclaimer ... :wink:

Heartfelt is always right and always spectacular .... and I 'felt' your write ...

Keep it up ... flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 10/02/08 09:01 PM
flowerforyou

lovemeifyoucan26's photo
Fri 10/03/08 01:03 AM

Not really fancy, or spectaculr in any way...again just off the top of my head just now..just wrote as it flowed through..
meaning is in it though..



I liked it better before the disclaimer ... :wink:

Heartfelt is always right and always spectacular .... and I 'felt' your write ...

Keep it up ... flowerforyou


Thank you..

lovemeifyoucan26's photo
Fri 10/03/08 01:04 AM
thank you to all who responded...any positive thing is encouragement...better 'en a boot, I say...winking