Topic: “Words on a Page”
TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/01/08 10:05 AM
“Words on a Page”



What my eyes have seen.
I have read words written upon a screen.
Words of praise I left behind.
Never realizing I was so blind.


All one had to do is take the time and edit.
But instead they choose to take the credit.
Beautiful words upon the page they wrote.
They had me from the start with my vote.


Many times I said you need to write a book.
But now after I took the time to look.
I was not only shocked for what I seen.
But found out they fell into a routine.


Did it become so easy to you?
And you were so happy for we did not have a clue.
You never thought that some how some way.
There may actually come a day.


Sooner or later you would be found out.
You thought you had it made and there was no doubt.
But sooner or later karma comes around.
And down you will fall to the ground.


They say the first time you learn.
The second time you will feel the burn.
And the third time is always the charm.
One then wonders what’s the harm.


The harm is when others find out.
You see for they never did doubt.
They thought your words were true.
Not one not even me had a clue.


K.L.M
9/25/08










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Wed 10/01/08 10:10 AM
Great write Kristi. Don't know who this pertains to but shame on him or her. Lucky for us the majority of people posting here are wonderful and creative people.flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 10/01/08 12:28 PM
One did know. How many times? I do not know. The reason why? I do not know. Why, I did not say anything on site? Jesse Jackson syndrome perhaps, keeping hope alive I was not once again with a hypocrite and the perp would see my point of view and cease of his own will, not mine.

End of confession......................

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/01/08 12:57 PM
Humm confession my dear one you have nothing to confess about. Even I know your words are but your own no one has your style of wordsnoway

Sometimes there comes a time that we must wait and see if another will speak for themselves. But never in the process are we guilty due to what they choose not to do. We learn from seeing what others do as well from what we do ourselves.

TwilightsTwin's photo
Wed 10/01/08 06:42 PM
drinker >>>Here's to the writers who are often unquoted, whose words are noted in our hearts for their originality makes its greatest worth.

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 10/01/08 06:54 PM
Edited by ArtGurl on Wed 10/01/08 06:58 PM
Another great write Kristi ... although it is such a shame that you were provided such a catalyst ...

flowerforyou


...trying to curb my building curiosity ... what

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Wed 10/01/08 07:00 PM

Humm confession my dear one you have nothing to confess about. Even I know your words are but your own no one has your style of wordsnoway

Sometimes there comes a time that we must wait and see if another will speak for themselves. But never in the process are we guilty due to what they choose not to do. We learn from seeing what others do as well from what we do ourselves.

frown Everyone i read seems to be original, say who and let them plead their case!drinker

Noden's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:05 PM
drinks Cheers beautiful, Miss Sherlock seeking truth!flowers

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:07 PM
Awwwwww curiosity they say killed the cat all I can say is what is in the past shall remain unless you just happen to search yourself and find out.

More or less it is over and done with let sleeping dogs lie.bigsmile

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:12 PM

Awwwwww curiosity they say killed the cat all I can say is what is in the past shall remain unless you just happen to search yourself and find out.

More or less it is over and done with let sleeping dogs lie.bigsmile


my thought exactly ... :wink:

Noden's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:13 PM
noway oh no not me seeking I meant you girl, I don't even know what this is about... just wanted to say nice write..Texflowers

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Wed 10/01/08 07:36 PM

noway oh no not me seeking I meant you girl, I don't even know what this is about... just wanted to say nice write..Texflowers

I think she was talking to me Noden

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Wed 10/01/08 07:39 PM

Awwwwww curiosity they say killed the cat all I can say is what is in the past shall remain unless you just happen to search yourself and find out.

More or less it is over and done with let sleeping dogs lie.bigsmile

Just wanted to give them the benefit of the doubt maybe it was a accident.

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:39 PM
Edited by ArtGurl on Wed 10/01/08 07:45 PM

noway oh no not me seeking I meant you girl, I don't even know what this is about... just wanted to say nice write..Texflowers


laugh relax Noden & 10001 flowerforyou

It was I who wrote that I was trying to curb my growing curiosity ...


hence, Kristi's response about curiosity killing the cat ... laugh

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:43 PM
Awww ding ding Artgurl won the prize bigsmile flowers :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

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Wed 10/01/08 07:52 PM


noway oh no not me seeking I meant you girl, I don't even know what this is about... just wanted to say nice write..Texflowers


laugh relax Noden & 10001 flowerforyou

It was I who wrote that I was trying to curb my growing curiosity ...


hence, Kristi's response about curiosity killing the cat ... laugh

flowers Cool, but what about my curiosity, doesn't anyone think about my curiosity huhbigsmilelaugh NO just playing let sleeping dogs lie

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 10/01/08 07:55 PM
Edited by ArtGurl on Wed 10/01/08 08:01 PM

d4tc's photo
Wed 10/01/08 11:36 PM
Strong write. Smooth flow. flowerforyou

Havaman's photo
Thu 10/02/08 01:06 AM
Very Nice...thank you for shareing!