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      jus let me know what you think of my profile and pics
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      Very nice.   Hello and welcome!   | |
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      howdy your avery good lookin gal. send me some corn so i can make popcorn.     | |
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      looks good to me darlin  i dont see anything that could be changed 
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      Nice !!     !! welcome also !! and good luck !! | |
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      Nice pics....but for goodness sake.....punctuation!!!
 That run on sentence in your profile is hard to read. The info is clear enough, but a pause ( or at least the perception of one ) between lines of thought would be helpful. | |
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      I agree with the punctuation thing.
 Also, and pls dont be offended by this cos u DID ask, but ur headline talks of 'finding the right one' and imo, that shouldnt be ur main objective for being on here, it might make u look a lil desperate. No offence meant. | |
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        Edited by
        tlc1982
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      jus being honest thats me,sorry about the pun jus throwing it all together if you understand it its fine then
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| howdy your avery good lookin gal. send me some corn so i can make popcorn.     | |
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      Looks good from my computer.
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      You're very pretty and from your profile you sound like you have an inner substance and beauty as well.
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      I would definitely add punctuation and break up your description into paragraphs.  Good photos.    | |
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