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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 08/01/08 08:54 PM
And what then shall you say to me? What can I say to make you feel at ease with your decision? You made it freely with precision, with vision. Was there apprehension, attention to detail, frustration, manifestation of heartache? I don't know. Take what you have won; this is not to be undone. You can make it on your own despite the great unknown. Yet Godspeed your every step. Your inner depth will lead you. You will know what to say. You will see a different day. You will see your Sacred ways. You will hold a steady gaze. Every path can bring new light. Spread your wings and take your flight. JDS 08/01/08

AtrueOne Joined Fri 04/04/08 Posts: 1258	Fri 08/01/08 08:56 PM
I really liked that very cool

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 08/01/08 09:19 PM
Ty Atrue...I'm glad you do. I value that.

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Fri 08/01/08 10:48 PM
J... You will definately SOAR!!!

chevylover1965 Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 43370	Fri 08/01/08 10:50 PM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sat 08/02/08 04:18 AM
And what then shall you say to me? What can I say to make you feel at ease with your decision? You made it freely with precision, with vision. Was there apprehension, attention to detail, frustration, manifestation of heartache? I don't know. Take what you have won; this is not to be undone. You can make it on your own despite the great unknown. Yet Godspeed your every step. Your inner depth will lead you. You will know what to say. You will see a different day. You will see your Sacred ways. You will hold a steady gaze. Every path can bring new light. Spread your wings and take your flight. JDS 08/01/08 Angel, that was absolutely beautiful (as always) your words are like the song of a dove desending out of the heavens, giving us the strength to keep going.. thank you my dear, you are one in a million, if I could hug you I would

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 08/02/08 04:19 AM
Sounds like they should of listened to Humble "Pie " I try to say what i mean because i mean what i say " another good write!

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 08/02/08 04:23 AM
your looking more like a deer than a chevy chevylover1965 just kidding. sorry just miss my camaro i guess

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/02/08 07:39 AM
J... You will definately SOAR!!! Ty (((J)))....an awesome thought!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/02/08 07:40 AM
chevy....Ty for reading and for the flower

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/02/08 07:44 AM
And what then shall you say to me? What can I say to make you feel at ease with your decision? You made it freely with precision, with vision. Was there apprehension, attention to detail, frustration, manifestation of heartache? I don't know. Take what you have won; this is not to be undone. You can make it on your own despite the great unknown. Yet Godspeed your every step. Your inner depth will lead you. You will know what to say. You will see a different day. You will see your Sacred ways. You will hold a steady gaze. Every path can bring new light. Spread your wings and take your flight. JDS 08/01/08 Angel, that was absolutely beautiful (as always) your words are like the song of a dove desending out of the heavens, giving us the strength to keep going.. thank you my dear, you are one in a million, if I could hug you I would ((((D)))), and I'd hug you right back. Ty for such a lovely comment. Your comment is more than precious.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/02/08 07:46 AM
Sounds like they should of listened to Humble "Pie " I try to say what i mean because i mean what i say " another good write! Ty for the love 1000....ty for the flower

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 08/02/08 07:59 AM
Beautiful as always my dear friend.Godspeed!Cy

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sat 08/02/08 08:37 AM
and there is no end of ur flying, if once u open the wings of ur flight And what then shall you say to me? What can I say to make you feel at ease with your decision? You made it freely with precision, with vision. Was there apprehension, attention to detail, frustration, manifestation of heartache? I don't know. Take what you have won; this is not to be undone. You can make it on your own despite the great unknown. Yet Godspeed your every step. Your inner depth will lead you. You will know what to say. You will see a different day. You will see your Sacred ways. You will hold a steady gaze. Every path can bring new light. Spread your wings and take your flight. JDS 08/01/08

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 08/02/08 11:06 AM
beautiful as always, love the new pick

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/02/08 07:39 PM
(((Cy))), (((Frank))), (((Pam))) Ty...

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Sun 08/03/08 04:03 AM Edited by 2Btrue2One on Sun 08/03/08 04:07 AM
((((D)))), and I'd hug you right back. Ty for such a lovely comment. Your comment is more than precious. Maybe one day there will be an opportunity to do just that, along with a quite morning and a few cups of coffee.. and thank you for your kind words also

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Sun 08/03/08 04:12 AM
Very nice write. Hope you have a very nice day on this beautiful day.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 08/03/08 05:55 AM
Angel my dear, exquistely written and so beautiful are your words...follow that path and you will see the light...spread your wings, because you will soar to new heights. Loved it.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sun 08/03/08 03:39 PM
Wonderful, just what I wanted to see as I venture on a new journey. Thanks for your insight day after day.