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Topic: gone gone gone
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Mon 06/09/08 08:42 PM
restless panther-like walking,
agitation radiating with each step,
eyes flickering rapidly back at forth,
a silent phone, a blank white lit screen,
saying more loudly than a piercing scream,
you're gone, gone, gone

jumping at a sudden noise,
what am I, a war torn vet??
Rapidly gunfire voices outside my windows,
its evening and I haven't heard from you yet,
cruel insomnia creeping in, and I'm up at dawn,
but I'll never sleep now 'cause
you're gone, gone, gone

my arms aching to hold you,
these lips cold and so untouched,
my body empty and crying out for you,
my love unrequited, tossed aside blindly,
I never dreamed I'd miss you so much,
and not knowing now how I'll ever go on,
I'm an empty chalice, loveless and void,
lonely and lost cause you're gone,
gone
gone.....

wraithme66's photo
Mon 06/09/08 08:45 PM
Very nice... I used to be a soldier...

2Btrue2One's photo
Mon 06/09/08 08:58 PM
A nice story of love.. Thank you for sharing that..
flowerforyou :heart:

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Mon 06/09/08 08:59 PM

Very nice... I used to be a soldier...


Oh? Well, good to see you made it back safe and sound...thank you for reading and commenting flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 06/09/08 08:59 PM

A nice story of love.. Thank you for sharing that..
flowerforyou :heart:


You're very welcome sunshine :heart:

awolf1010's photo
Mon 06/09/08 09:01 PM
great write.....i feel the same way about parfaits

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Mon 06/09/08 09:02 PM

great write.....i feel the same way about parfaits


I myself prefer Kona Coffee Milkshakes but hey...another man's treasure....etc etc...

2Btrue2One's photo
Mon 06/09/08 09:14 PM


A nice story of love.. Thank you for sharing that..
flowerforyou :heart:


You're very welcome sunshine :heart:


Always appreciated sweetheart..smooched

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Mon 06/09/08 09:15 PM



A nice story of love.. Thank you for sharing that..
flowerforyou :heart:


You're very welcome sunshine :heart:


Always appreciated sweetheart..smooched


:heart:

pkh's photo
Mon 06/09/08 09:16 PM
flowerforyou very nice as always sweetie

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Mon 06/09/08 09:18 PM

flowerforyou very nice as always sweetie


Thank you sweetgirl!:heart:

s1owhand's photo
Mon 06/09/08 11:37 PM
and then there were none
just me

flowerforyou



fine. like a line. :heart:

frankfk's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:35 AM
gone, gone and gone, nice wordingflowerforyou
restless panther-like walking,
agitation radiating with each step,
eyes flickering rapidly back at forth,
a silent phone, a blank white lit screen,
saying more loudly than a piercing scream,
you're gone, gone, gone

jumping at a sudden noise,
what am I, a war torn vet??
Rapidly gunfire voices outside my windows,
its evening and I haven't heard from you yet,
cruel insomnia creeping in, and I'm up at dawn,
but I'll never sleep now 'cause
you're gone, gone, gone

my arms aching to hold you,
these lips cold and so untouched,
my body empty and crying out for you,
my love unrequited, tossed aside blindly,
I never dreamed I'd miss you so much,
and not knowing now how I'll ever go on,
I'm an empty chalice, loveless and void,
lonely and lost cause you're gone,
gone
gone.....

no photo
Tue 06/10/08 10:42 AM

and then there were none
just me

flowerforyou



fine. like a line. :heart:


or

Fine like wine? :heart:

no photo
Tue 06/10/08 10:43 AM

gone, gone and gone, nice wordingflowerforyou
restless panther-like walking,
agitation radiating with each step,
eyes flickering rapidly back at forth,
a silent phone, a blank white lit screen,
saying more loudly than a piercing scream,
you're gone, gone, gone

jumping at a sudden noise,
what am I, a war torn vet??
Rapidly gunfire voices outside my windows,
its evening and I haven't heard from you yet,
cruel insomnia creeping in, and I'm up at dawn,
but I'll never sleep now 'cause
you're gone, gone, gone

my arms aching to hold you,
these lips cold and so untouched,
my body empty and crying out for you,
my love unrequited, tossed aside blindly,
I never dreamed I'd miss you so much,
and not knowing now how I'll ever go on,
I'm an empty chalice, loveless and void,
lonely and lost cause you're gone,
gone
gone.....



Thank you Frank~flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 06/10/08 01:08 PM
Intensely emotional glasses


flowerforyou


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Tue 06/10/08 01:38 PM

Intensely emotional glasses


flowerforyou




Thank you my Angel :heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:52 PM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
Dang GONE it! I really liked it!
((((MsWizard))))

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Tue 06/10/08 05:10 PM

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
Dang GONE it! I really liked it!
((((MsWizard))))


I'm glad you do Teddy!!!! (((((((((((((((TEDDY)))))))))))) :heart: :heart:

kc0003's photo
Thu 06/12/08 01:25 PM
very sad but,very
good
good
good

flowerforyou :heart:

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