Topic: “Looking Around”
TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:06 AM

“Looking Around”


I sat and watch each day.
As love comes and goes their way.
Some seem to live in the past.
Thinking this one is the last.

Others keep looking ahead.
While some sit back and dread.
No longer do they want to look.
Wondering is there a book?

On how to make things work.
Before love makes me go berserk.
One never knows.
How love goes.

We are lost without it.
But we will never admit.
That no matter what we still want.
What seems to haunt.

Why must we chase.
Love before we can embrace.
At times it makes us cry.
And other times leave us asking why.

But then we all know in life.
Love is part of the strife.
We all must go through.
If it is love we want to pursue.

But things don’t always go our way.
And we are left in dismay.
Don’t stand and proclaim.
The other is all to blame.
You see when the time is right.
Love will ignite.


K.L.M
6/7/2008



flame1cutie's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:12 AM
Excellent:flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile

no photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:14 AM
Txy this is lovely. The last stanza in particular is haunting...:heart:

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:25 AM
Fire, pure FIRE.flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile

G

no photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:28 AM
So true Kristi, excellent write!!:wink: :smile: :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:36 AM
Good one girl! Good one! (((Kristi)))
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

(shoot- put the rope away)laugh

calmguy3's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:43 AM

So true Kristi, excellent write!!:wink: :smile: :smile:

I second that notion

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 06/07/08 05:18 PM
Thank you all for your kind words I do appreciate it very much glad that all could relate to it.flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Sun 06/08/08 08:56 AM
that's a beauty of life-ups and downs, kristiflowerforyou flowerforyou

“Looking Around”


I sat and watch each day.
As love comes and goes their way.
Some seem to live in the past.
Thinking this one is the last.

Others keep looking ahead.
While some sit back and dread.
No longer do they want to look.
Wondering is there a book?

On how to make things work.
Before love makes me go berserk.
One never knows.
How love goes.

We are lost without it.
But we will never admit.
That no matter what we still want.
What seems to haunt.

Why must we chase.
Love before we can embrace.
At times it makes us cry.
And other times leave us asking why.

But then we all know in life.
Love is part of the strife.
We all must go through.
If it is love we want to pursue.

But things don’t always go our way.
And we are left in dismay.
Don’t stand and proclaim.
The other is all to blame.
You see when the time is right.
Love will ignite.


K.L.M
6/7/2008




AngelLight's photo
Sun 06/08/08 09:21 AM
I believe that in one way or another, Love is always before us....I think the question is do we accept the form it has come in...Ty for your write :heart: flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 06/08/08 10:44 AM
A very beautiful poem kristi, and so very true for a lot of people..

flowerforyou :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 06/08/08 04:53 PM

I believe that in one way or another, Love is always before us....I think the question is do we accept the form it has come in...Ty for your write :heart: flowerforyou



Awww so very true indeed.bigsmile


Frank your right life does has it's ups and downs we learn to deal with them and move on.flowerforyou

Daniel thank you for reading.bigsmile

no photo
Sun 06/08/08 05:50 PM
:heart: A very living poem to grasp all of us into knowing
some of what most of us have been through. To come to know this as a realility, here on this net.

Nice poem Kristy and good to read you here as always..Keep smilling..:wink: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 06/09/08 01:02 PM
bigsmile Not only a reality on the net but as well in real life also.bigsmile

mteagle31's photo
Mon 06/09/08 01:10 PM
TRUE!!! SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL TX!!!flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 06/11/08 09:46 AM

TRUE!!! SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL TX!!!flowerforyou


Thank you very much mteagle flowerforyou