If I Lost...

If I lost...
The limbs, that help me walk to you,
Would you still love me
And carry us through?
If I lost...
The limbs, that I use to embrace your heart
Would you still love me
And keep us from tearing apart?

If I lost...
The voice, that expresses my love
Would you still love me
And everything I'm made of?
If I lost...
My sight, that gazes upon your beauty,
Would you still love me
And guide me with duty?

If I lost...
My mind, and forget who you are
Would you still love me
And remind me you're my star?
If I lost...
The will to live, and to keep going on
Would you lift me up
And bring my heart home?

How dedicated are you my dear
To the love we once knew,
Would you carry us on, being strong
With all you can do?
Would you have an undying love
No matter what the cost,
Keep us going and staying strong
If I lost...?

Bravo, maestro!!

Thank you Suz...that's the first time being called maestro.

Thanks Crazy...glad you liked it.

well done my friend!!

Thank you Marc...I've always wondered if true love existed, would someone stay with you through any or all of these mishaps in life. Or would they just walk away? Thanks again.


Thanks Scurlock...glad you liked it, I think.

That was wonderful. Makes you wonder if there is someone that would do all that for another. One can always hope that there is someone out there that would. When you find them and they are willing to stay through it all, that is when you know you have found true, spiritual love.

You have such a brilliant mind.I have wondered that myself.After my sister had her brain aneurysm everyone thought her husband would leave.But he stayed and does most everything for her, that is true love.And if it happened to me I would stay also because true love is found on the inside.Wonderful write

Beautiful write Robert. Now I keep picturing you in white tails bowing down to accept your applause.

Really tests the nature of true Love...

((((((((((((((My bro)))))))))))))))))
you never sieze to amaze me!!!


Love your writes

wow, just beautiful.

Very well written, (((Robert)))!! I love that one! I would do all of that for the one I love!

(((((( Robert ))))))))

For all Eternity,, My Love is with you

Wow

That's what I've always wondered myself and hope one day, I will find that true love, who will stay with me no matter what. Thanks Teri...

Pammie...that is true love what your sister and her husband have and that too is what I want. Maybe we will discover that as well.

Pam (pkd)...Me in a tux taking a bow...awww now that is right up there with Suz calling me maestro. Ya'll are too kind.

Yes Angel, those are the tests that most sometimes fail. The ones that pass, are the ones that have eternal love and true love. Thank you for your hearts sweetie.

Ali my sis...I'm glad I amaze you. Sometimes my mind can put some good stuff out there. Glad you loved it. Keep in touch more.

Susan, glad you liked it as well sweetie.


Erica, I know you would. I can tell in your voice you would be that dedicated.

Denise...As my love for you will always be there (((((Dee)))))


Calm, glad you were impressed.

That was absolutely beautiful!!!!! Applause and a standing ovation my friend!!!!!!

that was wonderful... thanks for sharing

WOW all this and a stand O...where is that tux Pam?? I didn't realize this one would go over that well.

Thanks screamin..glad you liked it as well.