Topic: End To
Sharris's photo
Tue 05/13/08 09:08 PM
End To

I took a walk,
T'was the end to a day.
To my sea,
To feel the blue, salt spray.
Needing to tear,
And wash away sad,
Past the concrete,
To the sandy, shored pad.
Slowly, I stepped,
Immersed in my fade.
Picking my flowers,
A hand filled bouquet.
Those that I pulled,
Their stems broke, expected.
Stretched to their limit,
Plucked, some rejected.
Some were snipped,
The strength they imposed
Kept them from snapping,
They were easier to hold.
Those who had been bent,
Snapped from the careless,
Passerby's shuffling,
Not thinking where they stepped,
Were the ones,
I saw first.
Obvious to me.
Their dry was much worst.
I held them all caring,
Their beauty revealing,
Flowers in hand,
And chosen, so healing.
A gift as I walked
This end of a day,
To my sea, picking flowers
And a blue-eyed, tear spray.

Raine Les 5/13/2008


ShyKBear's photo
Tue 05/13/08 09:25 PM
That was beautiful flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/13/08 09:34 PM

End To

I took a walk,
T'was the end to a day.
To my sea,
To feel the blue, salt spray.
Needing to tear,
And wash away sad,
Past the concrete,
To the sandy, shored pad.
Slowly, I stepped,
Immersed in my fade.
Picking my flowers,
A hand filled bouquet.
Those that I pulled,
Their stems broke, expected.
Stretched to their limit,
Plucked, some rejected.
Some were snipped,
The strength they imposed
Kept them from snapping,
They were easier to hold.
Those who had been bent,
Snapped from the careless,
Passerby's shuffling,
Not thinking where they stepped,
Were the ones,
I saw first.
Obvious to me.
Their dry was much worst.
I held them all caring,
Their beauty revealing,
Flowers in hand,
And chosen, so healing.
A gift as I walked
This end of a day,
To my sea, picking flowers
And a blue-eyed, tear spray.

Raine Les 5/13/2008




You leave me breathless and wanting more,,, Thank you Lovely for sharing your soul flowerforyou :heart:

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/14/08 06:06 AM
So heartfelt Sharris. Ty :cry: flowerforyou :heart:

d4tc's photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:37 AM
"Those that I pulled,
Their stems broke, expected."

Not this one! flowerforyou :wink:

no photo
Wed 05/14/08 08:40 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou very nice i loved it

Sharris's photo
Wed 05/14/08 10:07 AM
Such depth and understanding here..resillient and tenaciousness..the hearts exposed..
Thank you all.

pkh's photo
Wed 05/14/08 10:24 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou hugs