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Topic: Drawn Conclusion
Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Thu 05/08/08 11:07 AM
Drawn Conclusion Draw me into your conclusion, for your heart flows with fluid expressions causing a woman to love you as though she had always known you. Would that, just a kiss and soft lips, could seal the heart in this endeavor? To sit, still and silen, is like the melting of a fine darkest, oozing into the places unknown as the warmth of presence becomes the coal of the afterglow. A long silent, slow kiss, a long silent, snow blanket and a long hot soak, love's hold. You are eloquent as are your kisses and the touch of your skin roughing up against soft. You have taken my heart..and every other woman who discovers you..Drawn Raine Les 7/01/2007

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 05/08/08 11:09 AM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 05/08/08 11:13 AM
Drawn Conclusion Draw me into your conclusion, for your heart flows with fluid expressions causing a woman to love you as though she had always known you. Would that, just a kiss and soft lips, could seal the heart in this endeavor? To sit, still and silen, is like the melting of a fine darkest, oozing into the places unknown as the warmth of presence becomes the coal of the afterglow. A long silent, slow kiss, a long silent, snow blanket and a long hot soak, love's hold. You are eloquent as are your kisses and the touch of your skin roughing up against soft. You have taken my heart..and every other woman who discovers you..Drawn Raine Les 7/01/2007 Beautiful

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 05/08/08 11:14 AM
wonderful

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Thu 05/08/08 11:21 AM


WolfSoul Joined Thu 05/01/08 Posts: 60	Thu 05/08/08 11:26 AM
Very nice piece.

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 05/08/08 12:09 PM
Drawn Conclusion Draw me into your conclusion, for your heart flows with fluid expressions causing a woman to love you as though she had always known you. Would that, just a kiss and soft lips, could seal the heart in this endeavor? To sit, still and silen, is like the melting of a fine darkest, oozing into the places unknown as the warmth of presence becomes the coal of the afterglow. A long silent, slow kiss, a long silent, snow blanket and a long hot soak, love's hold. You are eloquent as are your kisses and the touch of your skin roughing up against soft. You have taken my heart..and every other woman who discovers you..Drawn Raine Les 7/01/2007 Beautiful....

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Thu 05/08/08 02:00 PM
That was wonderful Sadie..to whomever it was for.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 05/08/08 08:54 PM
Ahhhhhhh poetry!

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