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Across the desert sands the wind blows
Gritty and angry pieces of sand clinging to my skin Driving its way into my eyes I look across this vast emptiness Only one goal in mind I walk on Plodding past bleached out skulls Skulls of the ones who came before me And failed I must go on I must not fail Wind whipping my braids Tugging at them playfully Squinting to see I look towards the horizon Not much further now Bowing my head to keep the sand at bay I walk on for another day My feet slipping in the sand as it sucks me down And still I walk on Spear clutched in my hand Pack on my back In the distance I hear coyote The trickster howling his lament I push it from my mind Knowing he only wishes to deceive me I turn my ears inward Listening closely As the sacred bundle speaks It sings gently to me Guiding me on my way Walking through the days sun Wishing I were done Night falls and still I walk Lightening flashes across the sky Filling the dead air with the scent of ozone And yet no rains come I look up and watch as the Lightening Twins fight Grateful for the light With a great sigh I keep walking Feeling rocks beneath my feet The night air cooler now The scent on pine fills my nose I start to climb upward Slowly up the mountain I go Knowing that when I reach the top I will sleep beneath the eagles nest I look to the east waiting to see the sun rise Brother wolf raises his head eying me He whispers in the wind "Go on my friend Your journey is almost at its end When the moon splits the sky And blood pours from your eye You will see a brother from the north He will teach you the art of war Then you must prepare for the twins" My legs tremble with fatigue But still I walk on... |
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Damn girl felt as if I was wallking with you
on that journey very good one. |
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Very nice trek Poet. Now to get sand out of my moccasins.
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Ah, Walk's With Wind journey continues...I'm loving this series of
poems. Looking forward to the next adventure. |
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you are such a good poet this one was as if i were there
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Ms Poet, incredible walk indeed !!
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so beautiful..
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just beautiful sis
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It seems this journey never ends, it does one day have an ending of the
path we seek. One day soon you will travel it with another it has written in the analogues of life. :) G |
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He whispers in the wind
"Go on my friend Your journey is almost at its end When the moon splits the sky And blood pours from your eye You will see a brother from the north He will teach you the art of war Majorly loved that part, you write with good imagination and you place it for the readers too, so it draws you in and helps you better understand it and also you can place yourself there, very nicely done :) |
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felt every step on this path...
Good work Poet |
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girly, please don't stop writing!!!
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another great poem from a great sister.
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Safe Journey
you Rawk sis |
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love your pome
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Thank you all, ther eis more to com, Walks With Wind's journey is not
done, not by far |
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I loved it the second I read it.
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