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Topic: the weight of your tears
bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:04 AM
how is it the moon shine reflects from the tears covering your cheeks lights up your eyes and burns my face how could you from so far away how could it be any other way

codelockbox Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 1237	Wed 04/30/08 12:07 AM


bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:10 AM
cheers

sweetfireice Joined Sat 11/17/07 Posts: 110	Wed 04/30/08 12:15 AM
thats intense

sweetfireice Joined Sat 11/17/07 Posts: 110	Wed 04/30/08 12:16 AM
sweet plums and peaches

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:23 AM
i'll take that as a complement

sweetfireice Joined Sat 11/17/07 Posts: 110	Wed 04/30/08 12:34 AM
you should

SCURLOCK Joined Tue 03/11/08 Posts: 216	Wed 04/30/08 06:01 AM


bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 06:40 AM


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ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 04/30/08 07:25 AM
so much said with so few words! Nicely done!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Wed 04/30/08 07:30 AM
good one

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 04/30/08 10:24 AM
You have set me speachless.. nice write

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 04/30/08 11:00 AM
Nice...

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:40 PM
thank you teddy and txs

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:41 PM
You have set me speachless.. nice write thank you very much

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:42 PM
so much said with so few words! Nicely done! thank you artgurl it means a lot

bizybawdy Joined Fri 04/11/08 Posts: 663	Wed 04/30/08 12:43 PM
thank you pkd and rush i'm glad you ladies liked it

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