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Topic: “Sweet Dreams”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Mon 04/14/08 02:23 PM
“Sweet Dreams” I heard you whisper. And I snuggled deeper. Here down deep within the covers. We shared together like two lovers. I heard you whisper my name. Deep down the fires began to flame. There slowly as you touched my skin. It made my head start to spin. Just to feel your soft touch. I have wanted it so much. I had no sense of shame. From the bed I watched the candle flame. Flickering as it danced upon the wall. It was your name that I did call. As I felt your fingers dance. Across my skin it put me in a trance. Just to feel each move you made. As my dreams you did invade. You see it seems. Again you have invaded my dreams. K.L.M 4/14/08

Shaden Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 6118	Mon 04/14/08 02:24 PM


msdestinbooty Joined Wed 03/12/08 Posts: 1915	Mon 04/14/08 02:35 PM
I loved it!!

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Mon 04/14/08 02:37 PM
(some mysterious person is out there thinking "DID I DO THAT?" )

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Mon 04/14/08 02:39 PM
(some mysterious person is out there thinking "DID I DO THAT?" ) Heheheeh ya think lmao msdestinbooty thank you very much for reading glad you liked it Shaden thanks for reading girl

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 03:56 PM
Niccccccccccce write (((Kristi)))

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/14/08 04:23 PM
Dreams... the stuff that makes the world go round! (((((Kristi)))))

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/14/08 04:25 PM
Ohh Texs, I'd be careful about them dreams,,,seems Den has been havng the same thing,lol,lol NICE POEM.....

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Mon 04/14/08 05:22 PM
Ohh Texs, I'd be careful about them dreams,,,seems Den has been havng the same thing,lol,lol NICE POEM..... Humm true but our dreams are not of each other I can assure you of that lmao

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Mon 04/14/08 05:23 PM
Dreams... the stuff that makes the world go round! (((((Kristi))))) There is nothing better then dreams MsTeddy thank you my friend

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Mon 04/14/08 05:36 PM
Your hot mama, you got a tempature of a hundred and three, check it and see... Wow, Kristi!!! sizzzzzzzzle.... "on fire babes" nice write!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Mon 04/14/08 05:59 PM
Your hot mama, you got a tempature of a hundred and three, check it and see... Wow, Kristi!!! sizzzzzzzzle.... "on fire babes" nice write! Ohhhhhhhh my girl you just made me chuckle thank you your sweet hummm temp of a 103 ohhhh honey I'm steaming for sure lmao

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 04/14/08 06:47 PM
vow, nice stuff “Sweet Dreams” I heard you whisper. And I snuggled deeper. Here down deep within the covers. We shared together like two lovers. I heard you whisper my name. Deep down the fires began to flame. There slowly as you touched my skin. It made my head start to spin. Just to feel your soft touch. I have wanted it so much. I had no sense of shame. From the bed I watched the candle flame. Flickering as it danced upon the wall. It was your name that I did call. As I felt your fingers dance. Across my skin it put me in a trance. Just to feel each move you made. As my dreams you did invade. You see it seems. Again you have invaded my dreams. K.L.M 4/14/08

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 04/14/08 06:54 PM
very nice

TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Mon 04/14/08 07:04 PM
That was awesome I really like that write.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Mon 04/14/08 07:09 PM
Frank as always my friend thank you for reading 1000111010123 thank you for ready and welcome to the site TonyV thank you for your kind words and also welcome to the site

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 04/14/08 07:13 PM
"i like that" :icecubeforyou:

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Tue 04/15/08 07:11 AM
"i like that" :icecubeforyou: Can I just have more Sweet Dreams instead lmao

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Thu 04/17/08 07:40 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 04/17/08 07:42 PM
guess i missed this one too