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Topic: For Terry (iam4u)
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/14/08 12:48 PM
Terry I am your brother even though we are from other mother's I will stand by your side I will help you my friend I will be with you until the bitter end You are the big brother you are tried and true but I cannot tell a lie I will stand up and fight for you I know when God looks he see's you there his light shines on you it makes people stare I wish I could measure up to the kind of man you are when I look in the heavens I see your personal star God has reserved for you a very special place he has blessed you with his saving grace You are a great man I want you to know I am you little brother at you command By Daniel 04/14/08 For you my dear big brother

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 12:49 PM
Thats nice!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 04/14/08 12:52 PM


writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Mon 04/14/08 12:56 PM
aww,that's nice ...Now,who's Terry?

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Mon 04/14/08 12:57 PM
That is such a great poem and dedication.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/14/08 01:04 PM
very nice write for a great guy

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/14/08 01:06 PM
Thank you all for your replies.. and writer_gurl, Terry is iam4u.. if you look you can see his poems, or you can look at my profile and see him on my friends list on page three...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Mon 04/14/08 01:06 PM
very nice

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/14/08 01:09 PM
Daniel this is beautiful! Terry is so deserving and is the man I also call brother from another mother... He is my Brother Man! Nice tribute

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/14/08 01:13 PM
(((((kristi))))) (((((Vicki))))) How did the two of you get so so sweet? I will never Know...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/14/08 01:15 PM
(((((kristi))))) (((((Vicki))))) How did the two of you get so so sweet? I will never Know... There you go again making my face turn all red! Now come kiss me and make me lose my breath!

Shaden Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 6118	Mon 04/14/08 01:17 PM
Very nice! Terry is a very good man. I've never seen him act badly, towards another.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 04/14/08 01:22 PM
Thank you Shaden, he is, I just wanted him to be told, he deserves it you know...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Mon 04/14/08 01:49 PM
(((((kristi))))) (((((Vicki))))) How did the two of you get so so sweet? I will never Know... Hummm cause I was so rotten growing up

Shaden Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 6118	Mon 04/14/08 01:51 PM
Yes, he does. He is always there to brighten other's days or nights.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/14/08 01:54 PM
Thank you Shaden, he is, I just wanted him to be told, he deserves it you know... wow, now ya got me w/o words. Thank YOU very much Daniel, its good to know you got my back. THIS is an honor THAT is TRULLY FELT. I also will be there for you my friend, and brother. Some people can live here for a while, and leave never to have been remembered. YOU DANIEL, will NEVER be FORGOTTEN by this man..THANK YOU!! I give you one hand to shake and one as that tuff guy, half hug...lol WE became Bro's...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/14/08 01:54 PM
(((((kristi))))) (((((Vicki))))) How did the two of you get so so sweet? I will never Know... Hummm cause I was so rotten growing up LMAO!!! Love you girl!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 04/14/08 02:04 PM
very thoughtful and nicely worded

ShyKBear Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 368	Mon 04/14/08 02:10 PM
Fantastic Write

EarthSprite Joined Mon 04/02/07 Posts: 12114	Mon 04/14/08 02:26 PM
This tribute is just like the man that it was written for... Awesome