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Topic: Dear Death...
MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 12:23 PM
Dear Death, I have been fighting you since I was concieved. You have welcomed yourself into so many lifes. Leaving behind such strife. Everyone knows of you. Someday all will meet you. You have met some of my friends, and knew my relatives too. You even came for my pets, oh shame on you. Oh death why do you stand looking over my shoulders. I want to get soooo much older. Do you carry a watch on you. Is there a alarm set for each and every one. Tell me death is your job fun? What will you do- when there is no job to do? Will there be a death for you too? Hey death I don't want to play. At least not today, so please go away. You stalk me so lately, I plea with you- leave me be. Death get off my door step. Your not welcome here from me. I don't fear you, not even when your near. Time is what I ask you- to give me more of. So death if your listening please go away. Today is not the day... Sincerly yours, Living ************************************************************** By: Teddy 04-14-08

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Mon 04/14/08 12:27 PM
Dear Death, I have been fighting you since I was concieved. You have welcomed yourself into so many lifes. Leaving behind such strife. Everyone knows of you. Someday all will meet you. You have met some of my friends, and knew my relatives too. You even came for my pets, oh shame on you. Oh death why do you stand looking over my shoulders. I want to get soooo much older. Do you carry a watch on you. Is there a alarm set for each and every one. Tell me death is your job fun? What will you do- when there is no job to do? Will there be a death for you too? Hey death I don't want to play. At least not today, so please go away. You stalk me so lately, I plea with you- leave me be. Death get off my door step. Your not welcome here from me. I don't fear you, not even when your near. Time is what I ask you- to give me more of. So death if your listening please go away. Today is not the day... Sincerly yours, Living ************************************************************** By: Teddy 04-14-08 Oh Ms Teddy, has he been worrying you? A very profound write here.

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 04/14/08 12:28 PM
nice write, susie peace jimmy

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 04/14/08 12:29 PM
Living with you Lady Bear! Doin a happy bear dance with you just because!

EarthSprite Joined Mon 04/02/07 Posts: 12114	Mon 04/14/08 12:30 PM
MsTeddy... I stand along side you in this plea, holding your hand and yelling..Not today!!..

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 12:32 PM
Its ok (((Bonny))) just something I needed to write. Sometimes I get deep and this was one of those moments.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 04/14/08 01:05 PM
MsTeddy... I stand along side you in this plea, holding your hand and yelling..Not today!!.. Love and hugs to you both

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/14/08 01:23 PM
(((EarthSprite))) NOT TODAY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (((Bonny,Jimmy,Vicki,Pam)))

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Mon 04/14/08 03:42 PM
(((((MsTeddyB))))) slowly nodding head in agreement

cmeasiam Joined Fri 06/08/07 Posts: 141	Mon 04/14/08 06:49 PM
Wow!Great write.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/14/08 06:59 PM
Oh Miss T. I love this write,,DEATH like love is never seen. But felt into the depth of hearts many times in our lives. If we WANT IT, it will come. IF WE FIGHT IT, it will not be today.... LIVE,LAUGH,LOVE.....and DEATH can JUST TAKE A NUMBER!!!

TonyV Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 422	Mon 04/14/08 07:01 PM
good write!!!As long as we can,, don't give him your hand lol

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 04/14/08 07:03 PM
don'y get upset if he don't reply,read his union rules they will tell you why. lol great write MsT.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 04/14/08 09:54 PM
Ms Teddy Deeper and deeper you go,, I am sitting in awe

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Tue 04/15/08 07:10 AM
Aww MsTeddy tell Death to stay at bay for you still have a lot of living to do.

Mikey117 Joined Mon 11/20/06 Posts: 23736	Tue 04/15/08 07:13 AM
Ms Teddy, U are too damn awnery to do ANYTHING but live another 100 years!!!! I am gonna have to spank ya if you dont get your head up and SMILE!!!!!!!!!!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 04/15/08 10:55 AM
Ms Teddy, U are too damn awnery to do ANYTHING but live another 100 years!!!! I am gonna have to spank ya if you dont get your head up and SMILE!!!!!!!!!! Ya gonna spank me (((Mikey)))??? Ok- you guys... its just a write! I felt a need to exspess this- and I know some who are battling with this as we speak. It was meant as a different look at death, as a battle, and perhaps as an inspiration for some to fight... As "T" said... Take a number death! Thankyou for reading (((everyone)))