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Topic: My Knight......
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 04/04/08 09:47 PM
You came into my life so quick And took me by surprize A beautiful friendship did arise Our bond became very strong And in my mind this can't be wrong I had given you my love,from deep within my heart It"s the best I have to give,it was your's from the start I needed a brave knight Who would not give up the fight To dry my tears And over come my fears A knight to love me for who I am on the inside And with him there would be nothing to hide A knight who would stand strong Even when things went wrong Love is a journeyfor two And my knight I found in you You've opened a window You've shown me the light And my love for you still shines bright BAS

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Fri 04/04/08 10:05 PM
Very nice one, my deary ~Den

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 04/05/08 12:05 AM
GREAT POEM,,,WRITTEN by a GREAT LADY!! Lucky YOU Girl........Pssss, He SOUNDS,,,Great!!!Much Love!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 02:25 AM
nice Pam best of luck

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Sat 04/05/08 03:07 AM
You go girl get your knight and ride off into the sunset

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sat 04/05/08 07:17 AM
LIVE AND ENJOY WITH IT You came into my life so quick And took me by surprize A beautiful friendship did arise Our bond became very strong And in my mind this can't be wrong I had given you my love,from deep within my heart It"s the best I have to give,it was your's from the start I needed a brave knight Who would not give up the fight To dry my tears And over come my fears A knight to love me for who I am on the inside And with him there would be nothing to hide A knight who would stand strong Even when things went wrong Love is a journeyfor two And my knight I found in you You've opened a window You've shown me the light And my love for you still shines bright BAS

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 04/05/08 07:30 AM
(((Pam)))

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Sat 04/05/08 07:45 AM
Nice write PKH, now get the silver polish out and buff that Armour up

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 07:58 AM
Beautiful poem, beautiful lady, beautiful day for love!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 08:05 AM
Pam

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 04/05/08 08:39 AM
awww love all of you and your thoughts.It's been the same one I have written about for 7 months.You know that roller coaster ride,on again off again.He has touched me like no other,and I keep juming off the ride,afraid of these feelings and getting hurt.But I keep holding on and hoping we will have the fairy tail ending. Hope you all have a great weekend

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 08:42 AM
awww love all of you and your thoughts.It's been the same one I have written about for 7 months.You know that roller coaster ride,on again off again.He has touched me like no other,and I keep juming off the ride,afraid of these feelings and getting hurt.But I keep holding on and hoping we will have the fairy tail ending. Hope you all have a great weekend Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gosh I know that Ride,, Hold on sweetie,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm The after affects are Ummmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Incredible,,, Breath deep,,, Listen to your Soul,, And enjoy the ride,, Gotta have some Bumps along the way,,, Heckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk when it smooth's out,, Damnnnnnnnnnnnn Kinda like having that first taste of Ice Cream when your little,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm just gets better with time,, Love you

OneOfAKind4U Joined Sun 09/23/07 Posts: 688	Sat 04/05/08 08:43 AM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 04/05/08 10:22 AM
awww love all of you and your thoughts.It's been the same one I have written about for 7 months.You know that roller coaster ride,on again off again.He has touched me like no other,and I keep juming off the ride,afraid of these feelings and getting hurt.But I keep holding on and hoping we will have the fairy tail ending. Hope you all have a great weekend Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gosh I know that Ride,, Hold on sweetie,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm The after affects are Ummmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Incredible,,, Breath deep,,, Listen to your Soul,, And enjoy the ride,, Gotta have some Bumps along the way,,, Heckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk when it smooth's out,, Damnnnnnnnnnnnn Kinda like having that first taste of Ice Cream when your little,, Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm just gets better with time,, Love you awww you always seem to have the right words and advice,love you sweetie Oneofakind thankyou also

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Sat 04/05/08 05:28 PM
truly beautiful pkh. all the best to you.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 04/05/08 06:34 PM
truly beautiful pkh. all the best to you. thank you Britty apprecaite it

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Mon 04/07/08 01:38 AM