Previous 1 3
Topic: do you wanna dance?
no photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:42 PM
I want to move
I want to move
real slow
ro the warm
blue velvet glow
of Billie
wailing
the loss
of her
sweet
Lover Man …

I need to
close my eyes
breath
long deep sighs
with the tantalizing
sweetness
of Sade
on a warm
tropical night
deep
in the white
sands of Tahiti …

I ache to whisper
soft words
under the moonlight
bright
as Van serenades me
slowly
into the mystic
on this warm
spring night
the cool grass
under my warm
white skin …

I burn to get
the feeling
that
sexual healing
of Marvin
and Tammy
on a smoking
hot
summer tour
driving
pounding
fast
and hard
over the concrete
lure
of a long
smooth highway …

I want to
move as fine
as Ms Divine
when
she takes that
stance
moaning
hungrily
into a mic
gripped tight
as a wayward
lover …

do you wanna dance
with me?
oh baby
baby
baby
baby …
do you wanna
do you wanna …
… dance?

astrosfan's photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:44 PM
o yes !! ...

*extends hand.!!

astrosfan's photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:44 PM
o yes !! ...

*extends hand.!!

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:45 PM
Awwww nothing like getting lost in the beat of the music with the one you lovebigsmile

no photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:47 PM

o yes !! ...

*extends hand.!!


LMAO!!! guess you liked it then? flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:47 PM

Awwww nothing like getting lost in the beat of the music with the one you lovebigsmile


Happy Friday Lovely Texy, are you having a good one? flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 04/04/08 08:08 PM
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Dancing to the Beat of my Own Drum,,,,, Come on Ms Wiz,, Lets dance :heart:

no photo
Fri 04/04/08 08:24 PM
oh...dance with me in the pale moonlight......
while the stars stare on in delight...........
scents of jasmine wisp the wind in flight......
last this feeling.......ohhh sooo right........



I know this thang your feeling........





Da#n .......I miss it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bigsmile bigsmile nice write

PacificStar48's photo
Fri 04/04/08 08:29 PM
Girl I don't know what you do for a living but I sure hope it is related to writing because you have tons of talent.

no photo
Fri 04/04/08 10:44 PM

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Dancing to the Beat of my Own Drum,,,,, Come on Ms Wiz,, Lets dance :heart:


<<<<<<-----whirling and twirling with Mom under the moonlight dancing to the music and the stars shining bright.....

no photo
Fri 04/04/08 10:44 PM

oh...dance with me in the pale moonlight......
while the stars stare on in delight...........
scents of jasmine wisp the wind in flight......
last this feeling.......ohhh sooo right........



I know this thang your feeling........





Da#n .......I miss it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bigsmile bigsmile nice write


Me too!

no photo
Fri 04/04/08 10:45 PM

Girl I don't know what you do for a living but I sure hope it is related to writing because you have tons of talent.


I'm trying Star...I'm trying...but thank you SO much, I really appreciate the compliment and you taking the time to read me....flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

pkh's photo
Fri 04/04/08 10:45 PM
beautiful as always always enjoy your writes

s1owhand's photo
Fri 04/04/08 10:52 PM
may i recommend "Shall We Dance?"
the original japanese version quite
beautiful!

http://www.amazon.com/Shall-We-Dance-K%C3%B4ji-Yakusho/dp/B0002V7S34

don't waste time on the US remake tho - it was weak
compared to the original imho flowerforyou

bigsmile

no photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:11 AM

beautiful as always always enjoy your writes


Awwwww thank you pkd!!! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:12 AM

may i recommend "Shall We Dance?"
the original japanese version quite
beautiful!

http://www.amazon.com/Shall-We-Dance-K%C3%B4ji-Yakusho/dp/B0002V7S34

don't waste time on the US remake tho - it was weak
compared to the original imho flowerforyou

bigsmile


Oh s1ow! I found it sort of charming....and dat Richard Gere? He aint no so bad bruddah....just sayin...:heart:

Jaden11's photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:27 AM
Great one, yet again. You have a real grip on your emotions. I love the way you break the lines, short and poignant words and phrases.

flowerforyou flowerforyou Bravoflowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:39 AM

Great one, yet again. You have a real grip on your emotions. I love the way you break the lines, short and poignant words and phrases.

flowerforyou flowerforyou Bravoflowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you Jaden...I've been told by editors to use proper grammar, formatting, etc, but they can bite me. This is me. This is how I write. I'm glad you like it....flowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:49 AM
i can hear the music
in my mind
and it reminds me i am
do for another trip to
Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place
and soak it all in

nice

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


no photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:53 AM

i can hear the music
in my mind
and it reminds me i am
do for another trip to
Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place
and soak it all in

nice

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou




Got room for one more? flowerforyou

Previous 1 3