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Topic: do you wanna dance?
kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 12:57 AM
i can hear the music in my mind and it reminds me i am do for another trip to Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place and soak it all in nice Got room for one more? last time i went there was this lady who sounded just like Etta James she absolutely killed it all night of course there is room

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 12:59 AM
i can hear the music in my mind and it reminds me i am do for another trip to Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place and soak it all in nice Got room for one more? last time i went there was this lady who sounded just like Etta James she absolutely killed it all night of course there is room Someone who sounds like Etta James???? <<<-----jumps into the passenger seat and screams "kick that pedal to the medal son!!!"

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 04/05/08 01:06 AM
Dancing has always been my passion to. And to just swing in country two steps, or chubby and his twist. Disco lights, urban fights, now to shizzzz and pop. Grinding slow to a hot latino beat.. GREAT POEM, and feeling!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 01:07 AM
i can hear the music in my mind and it reminds me i am do for another trip to Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place and soak it all in nice Got room for one more? last time i went there was this lady who sounded just like Etta James she absolutely killed it all night of course there is room Someone who sounds like Etta James???? <<<-----jumps into the passenger seat and screams "kick that pedal to the medal son!!!" yes she was really good the next night Dr. John (remember him) did show for the katrina victims BB King joined in along with counting crows you just can't tell who will be there

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 01:11 AM
Dancing has always been my passion to. And to just swing in country two steps, or chubby and his twist. Disco lights, urban fights, now to shizzzz and pop. Grinding slow to a hot latino beat.. GREAT POEM, and feeling! <<----tossing iam another 20....psssst....keep it up...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 01:11 AM
i can hear the music in my mind and it reminds me i am do for another trip to Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place and soak it all in nice Got room for one more? last time i went there was this lady who sounded just like Etta James she absolutely killed it all night of course there is room Someone who sounds like Etta James???? <<<-----jumps into the passenger seat and screams "kick that pedal to the medal son!!!" yes she was really good the next night Dr. John (remember him) did show for the katrina victims BB King joined in along with counting crows you just can't tell who will be there Of COURSE I remember Dr. John! He was GREAT!!!!!!!!!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 04/05/08 01:16 AM
i can hear the music in my mind and it reminds me i am do for another trip to Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place and soak it all in nice Got room for one more? last time i went there was this lady who sounded just like Etta James she absolutely killed it all night of course there is room Someone who sounds like Etta James???? <<<-----jumps into the passenger seat and screams "kick that pedal to the medal son!!!" yes she was really good the next night Dr. John (remember him) did show for the katrina victims BB King joined in along with counting crows you just can't tell who will be there Of COURSE I remember Dr. John! He was GREAT!!!!!!!!! hey now... i was just asking...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 04/05/08 02:06 AM
<<----tossing iam another 20....psssst....keep it up... This ones on me,wink. Slow-----dancing, swaying to the music. No-one --- else in the whole wide world, yes.

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 04/05/08 05:52 AM
MMMMMMMM!!!((((((Ms.Wizard)))))) Your toying with my most favorite subjects, dancing and music.... Owww, la la, I was swaying to the music love, you had me lock, stock and barrel now this is definately something I love your poem released me, from a dreary place and made my feet take a dancing beat your phrases are so charming...sweet lady friend of mine....giggling now love,love,loved your piece.. Noden

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Sat 04/05/08 07:15 AM
DANCE DANCE AND DANCE WIZ

ddn122 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 12855	Sat 04/05/08 07:17 AM
that kind of made me horny..... <----looking in closet for "dancing shoes"

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 04/05/08 07:29 AM
Dance!!! Like this write!!! (((MsWizard)))

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 08:07 AM
Lovely piece MsWiz! I found myself swaying in my seat Just to feel Your gentle touch How I long For it so much Just to feel That beat so smooth On the floor As we groove The music flows Into my soul Once again I feel whole Dancing here With you so close Greatful I'm the one That you chose

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:45 AM
i can hear the music in my mind and it reminds me i am do for another trip to Memphis where i can lounge at BB Kings place and soak it all in nice Got room for one more? last time i went there was this lady who sounded just like Etta James she absolutely killed it all night of course there is room Someone who sounds like Etta James???? <<<-----jumps into the passenger seat and screams "kick that pedal to the medal son!!!" yes she was really good the next night Dr. John (remember him) did show for the katrina victims BB King joined in along with counting crows you just can't tell who will be there Of COURSE I remember Dr. John! He was GREAT!!!!!!!!! hey now... i was just asking... I know....grin...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:46 AM
<<----tossing iam another 20....psssst....keep it up... This ones on me,wink. Slow-----dancing, swaying to the music. No-one --- else in the whole wide world, yes. No one else in the whole wide world...now Im thinking Johnny Rivers....sigh...thank you iam!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:47 AM
MMMMMMMM!!!((((((Ms.Wizard)))))) Your toying with my most favorite subjects, dancing and music.... Owww, la la, I was swaying to the music love, you had me lock, stock and barrel now this is definately something I love your poem released me, from a dreary place and made my feet take a dancing beat your phrases are so charming...sweet lady friend of mine....giggling now love,love,loved your piece.. Noden Dance Noden my girl! Dance like there's no tomorrow...because there may NOT be! We'll dance together my friend!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:48 AM
Dance!!! Like this write!!! (((MsWizard))) Teddy come dance with us! Put on your red shoes and dance the blues! (thank you bowie!!) ((((TEDDY))))

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:49 AM
that kind of made me horny..... <----looking in closet for "dancing shoes" You wear your dancing shoes when....oh never mind, just dance! Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:49 AM
DANCE DANCE AND DANCE WIZ Wanna dance with us Frank?

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 04/05/08 08:50 AM
Lovely piece MsWiz! I found myself swaying in my seat Just to feel Your gentle touch How I long For it so much Just to feel That beat so smooth On the floor As we groove The music flows Into my soul Once again I feel whole Dancing here With you so close Greatful I'm the one That you chose Vickie you've got that special rhythm my friend!