Topic: Foggy or Fair
Jaden11's photo
Fri 04/04/08 02:54 PM
Foggy or Fair

A man walked out of his house today
The roads were wet
The clouds were gray
His feet were heavy
As if to say
We should have stayed at home today

Another man walked out his door
A smile on his face
He lightly strolled
The air was crisp
And filled his core
With the sweet dew of sunrise on the moor

The roses smell sweeter,
The birds sing with ease.
The sun is shining brightly
Through the willows and eaves.

The difference you see
Is not in the air
But in each man’s heart
Whether foggy or fair

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Fri 04/04/08 03:09 PM
YOU ARE INDEED A BARD!! Very, very good writing!! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Jaden11's photo
Fri 04/04/08 03:31 PM
Thank you muchflowerforyou

(I love your rainbow)

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 04/04/08 03:59 PM
I really liked this Jaden ...

Nice to see you in the poetry section ... welcome flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Fri 04/04/08 04:21 PM
Very nice

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/04/08 06:27 PM
Good one!!!

Welcome!

flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 04/04/08 07:43 PM
Awesome write welcome to the site as wellflowerforyou


Or should I say welcome to the familybigsmile

LAMom's photo
Fri 04/04/08 08:33 PM
Welcome to the Family

Very Nice flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 04/04/08 08:34 PM
THIS.......is a great and inspiring write..........


welcome my friend.......................

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Jaden11's photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:18 AM
Sorry I ditched before most of you posted. Thanks all for the warm welcome. First post, I'll definately keep it updrinker drinker drinker