Topic: Manipulations Mechanizations Misfired | |
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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Thu 04/03/08 06:23 PM
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Have you ever had your feelings
Used to make you do, The bidding of another? Like a puppet, they play with you. Have you ever had Your reactions, natural inclinations, Used against you, Till your bound and trussed in mind numbing limitations? So much of this a soul can take, And then my friend you’ll find. WALLS will naturally erect. The spirit hides behind. These walls of mine Have stood through time, Built back in childhood days. An acting ability of sorts, To survive life’s nasty plays. An intuition grew from this, A way to people please. The who, the how, take one more bow, If it keeps me off my knees. Its taken me years And lots of tears, To find the self I am. A puppet no more Do I dance and twitch, Although at times, I’ll still Bee-otch, About the creation of man-- Ip-u-la-tion……………… |
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BRAVO!!! Love that you've lost your strings!!
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cut the strings and dance on your own
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very good
stirs up thoughts and feelings too close to home |
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Great fire girl,,,,
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Fly,,, Simply Fly
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Words impregnated with emotion.
Nice write. |
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"i like that"
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(((Wench)))
You dance so much better without those strings! |
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Edited by
ArtGurl
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Fri 04/04/08 12:50 PM
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I got no strings, to hold me down, to make me smile, or make me frown...
You're a 'real' girl now ... uhhh sorry had a Pinnochio flashback .... Beauteous! |
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GOOD one..
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nice..
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Edited by
Unknow
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Fri 04/04/08 01:42 PM
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Great write hun..
But you no long need to hide behind those walls.. Come, let my love remove those walls!!! |
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