Topic: Manipulations Mechanizations Misfired
Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 04/03/08 06:21 PM
Edited by Differentkindofwench on Thu 04/03/08 06:23 PM
Have you ever had your feelings
Used to make you do,
The bidding of another?
Like a puppet, they play with you.

Have you ever had
Your reactions, natural inclinations,
Used against you,
Till your bound and trussed
in mind numbing limitations?

So much of this a soul can take,
And then my friend you’ll find.
WALLS will naturally erect.
The spirit hides behind.

These walls of mine
Have stood through time,
Built back in childhood days.
An acting ability of sorts,
To survive life’s nasty plays.

An intuition grew from this,
A way to people please.
The who, the how, take one more bow,
If it keeps me off my knees.

Its taken me years
And lots of tears,
To find the self I am.
A puppet no more
Do I dance and twitch,
Although at times, I’ll still Bee-otch,
About the creation of man--
Ip-u-la-tion………………

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/03/08 06:23 PM
BRAVO!!! Love that you've lost your strings!!flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 04/03/08 06:26 PM
cut the strings and dance on your own

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Thu 04/03/08 06:32 PM
very good
stirs up thoughts and feelings too close to home

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Thu 04/03/08 06:35 PM
:heart: :heart: :heart: Great fire girl,,,,flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 04/03/08 07:38 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Fly,,, Simply Fly:heart:

Abracadabra's photo
Thu 04/03/08 10:32 PM
Words impregnated with emotion.

Nice write. bigsmile

s1owhand's photo
Fri 04/04/08 01:00 AM
"i like that"

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/04/08 06:06 AM
(((Wench)))

You dance so much better without those strings!
:heart: smooched flowerforyou :smile:

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 04/04/08 12:45 PM
Edited by ArtGurl on Fri 04/04/08 12:50 PM
I got no strings, to hold me down, to make me smile, or make me frown...


bigsmile


You're a 'real' girl now ... flowerforyou






uhhh sorry had a Pinnochio flashback .... blushing


Beauteous! :heart:

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Fri 04/04/08 01:02 PM
drinker :heart: drinker flowerforyou :heart: GOOD one..

wateraddict's photo
Fri 04/04/08 01:15 PM
nice..flowerforyou

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Fri 04/04/08 01:30 PM
Edited by Unknow on Fri 04/04/08 01:42 PM
Great write hun..
But you no long need to hide behind those walls..
Come, let my love remove those walls!!!happy
smooched :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: smooched