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Puppy Chowsa
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You know last week when you said
Those dirty things crammed into my head It would be nice for you now to deliver Especially when it just made me quiver No need for denying claim has been made My memory is just fine no it won't fade Don't go saying you lied made it all up I'm prepared for you to take care of this pup Every day you ignore it just goes to show Its mean and irresponsible you know Go clear your head remove that fog I'm no longer feeding you adopted dog |
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Hypocrites
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Have I named you
Said your name Mentioned you Like you claim Something I said What did I do Its all pathetic I don't even know you Wave your finger Blame some other Mind your own business I'm not your brother Keep to your self Especially those opinions I have no use for you Or any of your minions If words bother you Why even read Move to the next That's what you need If I call you out There will be no mistake You Hypocritical whining Morally corrupt fake |
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Eyeballz
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Huh?
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It doesn't matter how long or short you still may have, Should heaven decide to take you again, You live as one should, With God, with love. I'm in for it I suppose! 
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Poets and Writers
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Theodor Geisel - might very well be the best educated to top it all.
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Eyeballz
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The dispersion of light
By the turbid medium In the stroma of the iris Sounds of major tedium We all have an attraction It is the oculus is why A gateway to the soul Those colors of the eye Brown is most prevalent Oh so very frequent Shades include the black Primarily brown and sequent Blue seems a favorite Mine are Green and gold Hints of other colors Disappear when you get old I have a weakness Girls with eyes of grey Makes me weak kneed What else can I say Amber is an eye color Also a girl I know She has this aura One that seems to glow Then we have hazel Major mix of things I think of psychics What good luck it brings Red eyes of albino Quite different to say the least Don't let it freak you out Not one of them is a beast |
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Ode to A Kind of Love, Lost
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Nice Pansy, I have a romantic side as well as a dark humoured side. Bitterness is the enemy of joy.Nice to see you are not.Nobody is worth becoming bitter and joyless for but many do.Glad you have kept some of the good aspects of these people with you.Very good. Sweet C'mon now... Everyone has a Jedi or a Sith in them...just a matter of choosing which to let out when the time comes... 
...and then there's me who is a Lava Flea infested Mustafarian Jedi Wookie who thrives off the "force" of joyful bitterness. 
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Ice Fishing
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I never care what people say of my writes. I'm like you Brug it only inspires me but never encourages me to change.
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Too far. Long winded story.
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...Lady datura as there is with Lady Leigh....Around 25% of people have a toxic and difficult experience that can damage them forever. I am fortunately not one of them,so if I wanted one more time in their arms and breathing in their scent,that rare treasure is open to me.A dangerous siren,but beautiful.Fortunately i am not mourning.Peace and love Brug, I understood this poem right away. There are many folks that either need a dose of peyote or datura to pick up on it. A hit or two of acid might do the trick. |
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By..........
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"By Shoe"
Bruises appear, after a while, Continue actions, they compile. Every direction, it matters not, No defenses, broke fingers you've got. Aim to the head, access to be had Prolong with arms, will remain bad. Bend legs up to the chest, Attention to back is best. Look for swelling, black and blue, Water filled balloons, blood flew. Lacerations follow, excessive blows, Favorite target, honking nose. Time flows by, who knew Swinging my hard sole shoe. |
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By..........
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"By Spade"
Hands held high Nice strong grip To Explain before I let this rip Standing above Feet holding firm Pressing down You still squirm Head moves quickly Only side to side Focus to neck This will glide The voice begs Nothing heard Eyes beaten shut Vision blurred Raise to toes Reach to the sky Downward force Increases is why Below the chin Contact made Perfect decapitation With my spade |
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Ice Fishing
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I like the "blue but nice" line. I would like to read another one including the girl beneath the ice,with a face blue but nice. The rest was not as good as that line.That line is class.Inspired you strange man. Her chuff was chewy,blue and tough,If only I could defrost her just enough,mmmmm he thought,heating lamps,a series of pulleys,lifts and ramps. Keep writing mate. I have read much of it but comment rarely. I have little to add but encouragement. I am not into necro,gerbils or cats,but I will play with any words.I am no word racist. Peace It would be nice to have a folder for poems unleashed and no holds barred for the disturbed. I would filled it with hundreds I have filed away. I found quickly you can only post 3 an hour here. My favorite I have ever written was for a fellow employee with a lazy eye. It would be removed if I were to post it here. |
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PT's rant room
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How do you keep the music playing Alan Bergman / Marilyn Bergman / Michel Legrand http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BEizbjdJ99M --  ... sniff, sniff...--
Metallica / Kill'Em All / Am I Evil? James Hetfield / Lars Ulrich / Kirk Hammett / Cliff Burton https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u-HCHCuHMg |
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PT's rant room
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Your "E" is actually my "D" Ok! I'll leave it alone. Keep it rolling! Its nice. |
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dear romeo
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This is quite flattering. Nobody's ever written me a poem before how sweet 
U_R Very wise of you to choose the correct words but put more thought into it. Is it written for you or at you? |
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PT's rant room
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Mmmmm... Since you're asking... 
My first question about rehab is... Should it actually be set in: A. Correctional facility / prison B. Asylum / psych ward C. Addiction facility / rehab center D. Only the protagonist's head Yup. D. Could be any of those things then. Talented. 
Thanks for taking the time 
The second question is: Should the protagonist be: A. Male B. Female C. Remain unknown C. I love surprise endings. (Only if I don't have to live them. ) Your writing seems to fit that very well.
Kewl... Third question... About the ending: A. Escapes to "better" life B. Released C. Lets everything go through reflection D. Ruminates over and over E. Committed for life A.C.E. |
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Ice Fishing
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Through the haze
No clear ice Appeared a face Blue but nice Eyes were open Filled with fright Jaw hung low Her teeth were white Strains of hair Atop the plate Slight view Of her pate Hands held high Unthawed escape Around her neck Was tied some crepe Clothes flowed out As if in space Held in position Perfect place Peace has come Thanks to my push The ice thin As I kicked that tush |
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PT's rant room
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Bless my dog!
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Sicken thoughts, In my mind
Pain and suffering intertwined Not for me but for you Oh the horror I can do Cause you anguish for the thrill Confine the movement halt the will Thwart sound from the voice Gag the breathe only one choice Staunch fluid to the brain Inflict a beating with the chain Regain consciousness just in time Fill the wounds with salt and lime Ply the nails off the fingers Smell burnt flesh that lingers Expose to fluids both hot and cold The mind takes to parts untold Pinning eyelids open wide Horrid dryness wilted hide Arms stretched above the head Feeling gone but your not dead Switch to hanging by the feet Precise height hungry rats will eat Break bones one by one Then we shock just for fun Slit the throat end it all For the pigs make last call Now the pleasure is back anew This raccoon killed my dog Boo |
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"Questions"
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"Questions" Who is the Devil If not a confounder and a tease Thought mighty and proud Yet only a prisoner of his own desires Who am I In my high minded vanities I left a life I once knew Only time will tell. One in the same! |
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