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Wed 12/05/18 11:00 PM
Thank You Buddy

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Wed 12/05/18 05:34 PM
Thanks man! Appreciated.

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Wed 12/05/18 05:31 PM
'Wonder'

Can a Gull describe the beauty of a dove
Can a worm describe the features of the wispy clouds above
Or a nut explore the essence of its tree
Do they often wonder how they came to be

Do the raindrops ever wonder why there falling
Or the willow wonder why a willows green
Will a winter want to know why its a winter
Will a branch remember all its fallen leaves

Can a daylight ever feel a ray of sunshine
Does a meteor recall the length of space
Will a moment ever know when its a moment
Or the tide tell the existence of a wave

Can a mountain ever get to see a mountain
Can a rock consider why it has a face
Or a wonder wonder why it is a wonder
Will it ever wonder why it has a place

Written by Tamihana Te Whetu(Krytikal)

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Wed 12/05/18 04:52 PM
Edited by Krytikal on Wed 12/05/18 05:33 PM
'Smoke & Mirrors'

Your eyes tell the story of your past
As if to see the memories you keep
I see in you the echos ever last
The ripples of your history repeat
Its hard to travel onward up a mountain
When you feel as if your knees are getting weak
And a shoulder isnt there for you to cry on
And an ear is never present when you speak
If an angel isnt there to be a guardian
When a demon is around to bring you harm
Then your faith is nothing more then an illusion
That'll try to pick you up with broken arms

Written by Tamihana Te Whetu(Krytikal)

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Wed 12/05/18 10:21 AM
Thats pretty good:wink:
How long you ben writing for?