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Should I make a wish,
Upon on a falling star, Or ask for a gift, As Christmas is near, Should I take a risk, And ask for you, As my wish, As my gift, Coz I hold you so dear, Should I light a candle, Let it burn bright, Be positive, Our misunderstandings, Will all clear, Should I honestly tell you, How I feel about you, Or let you go, This is my only fear, Its months now, Yet you still on my mind, You the only reason I am waiting, The only reason I am still here.. |
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Beautiful poem. Love is in your heart. Hugs :)
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Beautiful poem. Love is in your heart. Hugs :) Thank you  
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I can't help but feel an upbeat tone to this poem, even though it's about doubt. There's an underlying sense of hope which makes me really like this poem.
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I can't help but feel an upbeat tone to this poem, even though it's about doubt. There's an underlying sense of hope which makes me really like this poem. Thank you and you are right. I was feeling hopeful when I wrote this. Must be the Christmas season
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Thats pretty good
How long you ben writing for? |
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Edited by
Jasmine
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Wed 12/05/18 12:10 PM
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Thats pretty good
How long you ben writing for? Thank you. Have always been writing but with long breaks. Last time I wrote was 6 years back. Started writing again from July this year and posting here on forum. |
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