Topic: Smoke & Mirrors
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Wed 12/05/18 04:52 PM
Edited by Krytikal on Wed 12/05/18 05:33 PM
'Smoke & Mirrors'

Your eyes tell the story of your past
As if to see the memories you keep
I see in you the echos ever last
The ripples of your history repeat
Its hard to travel onward up a mountain
When you feel as if your knees are getting weak
And a shoulder isnt there for you to cry on
And an ear is never present when you speak
If an angel isnt there to be a guardian
When a demon is around to bring you harm
Then your faith is nothing more then an illusion
That'll try to pick you up with broken arms

Written by Tamihana Te Whetu(Krytikal)

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Wed 12/05/18 05:17 PM
Edited by The Wrong Alice on Wed 12/05/18 05:19 PM
Nice cadence. And neither syrupy or morose, which makes a pleasant change

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Wed 12/05/18 05:34 PM
Thanks man! Appreciated.