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Topic: Once again...
Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Tue 12/29/20 08:06 PM
Walk with me on the beach, Dance with me in the rain, Say that you want me, Come let's fall in love again.. Look deep into my eyes, See your picture in my heart's frame, Say that you need me, Come let's fall in love again.. Whether its days, weeks or months, My feelings will remain the same, you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear, So come lets fall in love again, Maybe its time now, To forget the past, To let go of pain, Maybe its meant to be, So come lets fall in love again ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-)

salinshah Joined Mon 07/23/18 Posts: 1	Tue 12/29/20 09:54 PM
nice

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Tue 12/29/20 10:31 PM
nice Thank you

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3196	Wed 12/30/20 12:54 AM
Nice poem .

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Wed 12/30/20 01:13 AM
Nice poem . Thank you

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 19748	Wed 12/30/20 01:43 AM
ONCE AGIAN , You proved that you are born with a Silver Spoon !!!!!!!

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Wed 12/30/20 02:12 AM
ONCE AGIAN , You proved that you are born with a Silver Spoon !!!!!!! No, I wasn't lol but thank you

delightfulillusion Joined Fri 06/24/16 Posts: 119332	Wed 12/30/20 02:13 AM
You have a lovely way with words. I enjoyed reading this very much

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Wed 12/30/20 02:34 AM
You have a lovely way with words. I enjoyed reading this very much Thank you and glad you liked it

Don Joined Thu 09/27/18 Posts: 7	Wed 12/30/20 02:39 AM
very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain.

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Wed 12/30/20 02:47 AM
very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain. Thank you and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over.

delightfulillusion Joined Fri 06/24/16 Posts: 119332	Wed 12/30/20 02:49 AM
very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain. Thank you and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over. Fixed it for you

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Wed 12/30/20 03:04 AM
very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain. Thank you and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over. Fixed it for you Thank you so much

AJR Joined Tue 11/05/19 Posts: 16	Thu 12/31/20 07:28 AM
️. very nice

AJR Joined Tue 11/05/19 Posts: 16	Thu 12/31/20 07:29 AM
Happy New Year!!!!!!

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Thu 12/31/20 12:06 PM
️. very nice Thanks

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Thu 12/31/20 12:07 PM
Happy New Year!!!!!! Happy Near Year to you too

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1531	Fri 01/01/21 07:26 PM
Walk with me on the beach, Dance with me in the rain, Say that you want me, Come let's fall in love again.. Look deep into my eyes, See your picture in my heart's frame, Say that you need me, Come let's fall in love again.. Whether its days, weeks or months, My feelings will remain the same, you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear, So come lets fall in love again, Maybe its time now, To forget the past, To let go of pain, Maybe its meant to be, So come lets fall in love again ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-) And it is beautiful

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Fri 01/01/21 10:42 PM
Walk with me on the beach, Dance with me in the rain, Say that you want me, Come let's fall in love again.. Look deep into my eyes, See your picture in my heart's frame, Say that you need me, Come let's fall in love again.. Whether its days, weeks or months, My feelings will remain the same, you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear, So come lets fall in love again, Maybe its time now, To forget the past, To let go of pain, Maybe its meant to be, So come lets fall in love again ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-) And it is beautiful Thank you

Jasmine Joined Tue 07/24/18 Posts: 394	Sat 01/02/21 01:49 AM
I love is this Thank you