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Wed 09/29/21 03:42 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thanks dear :innocent:

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Wed 09/29/21 03:13 AM
My soul was tired,
Your care was required!

My body was unwell,
I felt not to tell!

Not expecting care,
No one beside to share!

Struggling to bear,
But there wasn't a tear!

Wished if you will care,
But expecting would be unfair!

Closed my eyes with a trouble,
Realizing that I'm just a rubble!

Suddenly realised you were beside,
As I opened my eyes wide!

You asked if I'm fine,
That moment was divine!

You were there to care,
As you said not to worry but share!

My soul was in peace,
But doesn't wish to cease!

God blessed me with a dream,
Which will never happen even if my fortune is extreme!
-Aatheera


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Wed 09/29/21 02:56 AM
:grin::grin:Wait its not me, it was from a poet.. :grin::grin: My only credit is copy pasting.....:stuck_out_tongue::stuck_out_tongue::stuck_out_tongue:
tc.

he he :smiley: whatever might be, it was fun :wink:

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Wed 09/29/21 02:38 AM
A Lovely Hand

Last night I held a lovely hand,
It was so small and neat,
I thought my heart with joy would burst
So wild was every beat.

No other hand unto my heart
Could greater pleasure bring
Than the one so dear I held last night.
Four Aces and a King
:red_circle::small_red_triangle_down::red_circle:

ha ha.. it kindles interest in reading each line to know what's next:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye::wink:finally it ends in a :grin: tone :smiley: well framed and nice :blush:

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Tue 09/28/21 08:41 AM
You are right my Friend , I too have Depression . I take three tablets daily
Morning
Afternoon
and Night plus
One spoon Clearmac Syrup

take care..

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Tue 09/28/21 08:39 AM
Now you will make me cry...:wink:
I'm not doing anything great,
Just a simple human..

Now lets stop chating here an let the whole viewers read an feel the imagination of YOU & Your Talent.


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Poetries.....:pray:

ha ha.. true, was about to say that :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
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Tue 09/28/21 08:37 AM
That's what everyone should live thier life with a positive mind.

Inspiring Poem For Broken Hearts an For Breaker of the :cupid: too.

S🏵U🏵P🏵E🏵R :thumbsup:

Thanks a ton :innocent:

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Tue 09/28/21 07:35 AM
@Aatheera first of all thankful to you.
Secondly i never can be better from you, nor as a poet no chance, nor a great human like you.
Yes its true, most of reading post inspires an gives a learning full lesson too...:slight_smile:

You are best, you were the best, you have a been always the best..

Will be waiting for your another poem of the fragrance of soil.

:cherry_blossom::slight_smile::cherry_blossom:
Keep It Up
Keep Smiling..

Thanks again :innocent::innocent: best part of you is motivating people.. this i realised from your messages to people who are down n those who needed kindness..always remember that so many of them including me are touched by your thoughtful msgs..

well, I will try my best to give you my fragrance of soil version soon:innocent:

take care, keep motivating us☺

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Tue 09/28/21 06:16 AM
When i will understand it i will let you know, trying to be poet...:grin:
But not like You Best..:thumbsup::thumbsup:
tc.

Thanks a ton for boosting me now n then, it really keeps me going☺

and I'm just learning to write poems from you and everyone here who bring up such wonderful versions here.. I ensure I read all of them which is the best part of my day :blush:

coming to your lines, when I first read it, sounded like that voice of a seed which dreams of sprouting again :blush: when motivation is within us, life always will be wished to be lived again as you said:innocent:

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Tue 09/28/21 04:45 AM
Give me some sunshine,
Give me some rain,
Give me an other chance,
I wanna grow up once again...
🌧:evergreen_tree::deciduous_tree::sunrise_over_mountains::palm_tree::cactus:🌧
:rainbow::thumbsup:

ha ha .. now explain me what's this for:slight_smile:

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Tue 09/28/21 02:30 AM
When I was 17, my best friend had just gotten his license.

We were out for a drive, he was distracted and we were headed for a phone pole, my heart was pounding, I was yelling at him, finally at the last second I grab the wheel and veer us away.

A few seconds later, he's yelling at me, frantically trying to rip my frozen hands off the wheel, we were headed for another pole on the opposite side.

I was so shaken up that my reaction was the opposite and equal danger, that was my first lesson on this topic.

Very often we experience something traumatic, we seek self preservation, to avoid it from happening again, and we forget to let go, that "one direction" isn't a cure all.


We're jaded by past experiences, broken marriages, deceased spouses, you name it, but what we need to remember is that while we might have had a bad experience in the past under one set of circumstances, it does NOT mean the next circumstance will be the same.


I had an experience in my early 20's with a fiancé that cheated, for 10 years I treated all women like they were going to cheat, I was insecure, guarded, and possessive, all because I'd subconsciously assumed she was the bellwether, until I finally learned she was the outlier not the norm.


If you've been hurt in the past, yes, be careful, but also be sure to let go of the wheel and straighten direction once the car's back on the road.

so well narrated n explained :slight_smile: Thanks Mark:innocent:

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Tue 09/28/21 02:25 AM
Face it alone,
Get a rid out of it.
You will have to face the difficulty of your own.
Time heals lots of questions.
Wait for your time:clock12:
Lot's of way to pass the lonely time
Rest is your community way an how you approach

All The Best :thumbsup:

well said:clap::clap: each line is true n the final strength comes from us when we manage alone!

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Tue 09/28/21 02:24 AM
it's too hard that no one is there to here you... it leads to depression

yes that's true, there won't be anyone to hear! but we need to cope ourselves to realise that theres no one permanent in our lives n finally it's only you who's gona manage every thing.. own yourself n execute your hobbies, travel or do anything which keeps you engaged n happy.. take care n you ll be fine :slight_smile:

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Mon 09/27/21 08:23 AM
Its True that , A Poet looks at the World the way a Man Looks at a Woman.
I'm Pressed ( Impressed )

first excitement was when you addressed me as a poet :innocent: "a dream come true moment" ☺
second, my creation had impressed you ☺:innocent:
Thanks a ton :innocent: in-spired :blush::wink:

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Sun 09/26/21 05:16 AM
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Thankyou ☺:innocent:

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Sun 09/26/21 05:16 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thankyou dear ☺:innocent:

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Sun 09/26/21 03:11 AM
Pink roses so fresh,
Your first message amidst the morning rush!

Red apples in the table,
That deep love which keeps me stable!

Yellow lemons in that chilled glass,
That warm smile makes me forget my past!

Green grass with it's fragrance so deep,
That care which makes me weep!

Orange bangles on my hand,
Your humourous nature holds us well bond!

Black car of mine,
That wild look from your eyes makes me shine!

Violet tulips in my garden,
Your commitment on me has no end!

Blue kajal on my eyes,
Your never ending responsibility for me so nice!
-Aatheera:innocent::innocent:






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Sat 09/18/21 06:09 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thankyou :innocent:

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Sat 09/18/21 12:19 PM
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Thank you :blush:

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Sat 09/18/21 10:44 AM
waves in the sea,
rushed towards me,
I knelt to touch the waves,
it touched my hands and left me!

I tried to leave but saw my legs immersed under the sand,
I tried to remove my legs from the sand,
while the same wave came again,

I didn't see as I was in a hurry to leave,
this time it came with a wild force,
burried my legs deeper in the sand,
not allowing me to go!

it touched my hands again,
and held me for a while,
made me smile,
it stood around me,
calm and mild,
yet a more wild,
I knelt again to enjoy it's return,
it left immersing me with it's touch so kind!
- Aatheera