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Here I sit, all
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this was hilarious Great! Great! Great! Hollywood Script Material Action take one |
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fishing pole
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I like this one
you can't go wrong with a day of fishin even if you don't catch anything |
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A love between you and me
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Thank you Both
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Fragile souls
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siic, that means cool in my nephews language. siic poem This is probably the only time i don't mind being siic/sick |
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A love between you and me
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A love between you and me
Like carrots and peas love it when you say No one feeds your soul more than me Im the spice Your lips taste every night You lift my spirit like a kite It feels so right The walks we take in the night Shooting stars come from afar a beat skips within my heart A love between you and me |
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great irony at the end Ditto!!! Great write Since Ditto's taken what word can i use to send your way to show you got an A ooh i got it! touche!! |
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Something Great Happened
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So lively and quick She lit the wick, A call she received She didn't perceive. Angel you're good As always you should. Thank you my dear For being here. Robert, you're a love. Ty. Very well done the both of you very lite and brite like the light coming from an angel |
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Fragile souls
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The pain the hurt the names the dirt she falls to the floor she cant take it anymore weak and alone cant bear the pain she takes a walk in the rain in the dark nights shadow she walks and walks not a word just silence she never talked thats where it ended she took out the knife she had no reason no worth no life they said they were sorry they didnt realise no-one could see the painn beyond the smile they grieved of her loss the story of pain never told she lived her desperate life a fragile soul Hope you don't mind me jumpin in and adding this!! Very well done I'm thinkin this piece could use it's own page I sometimes worry for those who find a strange glamour in this fragile soul and the path she chose to take it's a choice i hope no one makes My thoughts i know are shared by many of you Keep doing what you do Because it's folk's like me and you who are food/strength for fragiles souls we read about in the daily news |
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The Baby
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The Baby
________ Looking out thru my hearts window So young & new My minny soul of a minow Looking out my souls window Telescope eyes Search near and wide In wonder of things passing by How my emotions rise To things of sparkle & shine As a child my mind plays Growing up day to day My front tooth Found it's place Onto my baby face I wear baby blues Nothing pink or made of lace Drink my bottle As if in a race Ignore the milk as it runs down my face Mommy lays me down She makes funny googoo sounds Daddy acts the clown When he comes around His funny baby sounds Make me smile Acting goofy all the while Just like me they long to be Closer to those baby blues Just like the one's i got Mommy & Daddy Have them too |
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Fragile souls
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Think about you all the time
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Deep and intense. Very nice write Thank you very much. nice to see my piece found approval in your minds eye |
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Think about you all the time
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Great piece Man! Reminds me of this song from Incubus, this song makes me http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpHFyYrNuuM I dig my toes into the sand The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket I lean against the wind, pretend that I am weightless And in this moment I am happy Happy I wish you were here I wish you were here I wish you were here I wish you were...here I lay my head onto the sand The sky resembles a back-lit canopy with holes punched in it I'm counting UFO's, I signal them with my lighter And in this moment i am happy Happy I wish you were here I wish you were here I wish you were...here Wish you were here The world's a rollercoaster And I am not strapped in Maybe I should hold with care But my hands are busy in the air I wish you were here I wish you were... I wish you were here I wish you were here I wish you were...here Wish you were here Thanks and i checked out the song. I liked it. Thumbs up on the song |
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Think about you all the time
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WOW!!!!! VERY TOUCHING!!! Thanks mteagle31 Whipped that up this morning over a glass of milk and a maple bar amazing what suger will do for you |
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Fragile souls
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Fragile souls
Molded like clay Easly dismayed Agile not your style Vulnerable all the while Easly tricked to walk a mile Fragile souls The world can be so cold Brittle hearts shatter like glass Buried six feet under the grass Stabbed in the back Surely leaves a scar on your heart After being cracked Fragile souls Be cautious of what your told listen to those who know who's scars are new an old Fragile souls |
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Think about you all the time
Edited by
calmguy3
on
Tue 06/03/08 11:51 AM
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Friends say it's such a crime
how we think of each other all the time You & me together We thought it would last forever It's come to an end Find myself avoiding friends Some times it hurts for a minute Other times the pain has no limit It's all over town My heart has a frown Think about you all the time Friends say it's such a crime Can't get out of my head Things we did in bed Poems to you i read Your soul was fed Think about you all the time Loved being your clown Turned your frowns upside down Who was watching i gave not a damn I was your peanutbutter You were my jam Think about you all the time How we drank Taquila with a lime Our times together so divine I was yours & you were mine But the Lord came knocking Said it was your time Think about you all the time Why couldn't you stay Why Lord so soon came her day My life is grey My shoes standing in the pouring rain Under tears from the pain Will i find one like you again What is this How am i supposed to live without you You fade into the mist Think about you all the time They say it's over An opening to my mind Those words cannot find Don't wanna say goodbye Think about you all the time Close my eyes It's all a bad dream In the morning i struggle to say In my dream last night you went away God said you left me And just when i needed you most But your here and your mine And not up their with the divine Think about you all the time Honey to that dream pay no mind I'm here & your their We ain't going no where Think about you all the time |
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Why should it bother me now?
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Your Welcome Butterfly of Silk
Who's spirit i know will never Wither or Wilt |
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Kind of Naughty
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that was hilarious
a little icky with the mayo and all but still funny |
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Thats funny
I like it |
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Tonight I ...
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Cry your tears let the river flow then say goodbye and let it go hurting yourself to ease the pain just lets him win his eternal game.... Find the peaceful spot in your heart... ooh i like that it has a nice flow |
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Tonight I ...
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Damn Gurl that was strong
just remember in this forum support comes in the form of an open palm making it easier to hold on so be strong cause non of us wanna see you do any harm to your pretty arm |
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