Topic: Fragile souls
calmguy3's photo
Tue 06/03/08 12:31 PM
Fragile souls
Molded like clay
Easly dismayed
Agile not your style
Vulnerable all the while
Easly tricked to walk a mile
Fragile souls
The world can be so cold
Brittle hearts shatter like glass
Buried six feet under the grass
Stabbed in the back
Surely leaves a scar on your heart
After being cracked
Fragile souls
Be cautious of what your told
listen to those who know
who's scars are new an old
Fragile souls

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 06/03/08 12:34 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 06/03/08 12:39 PM
flowerforyou

calmguy3's photo
Tue 06/03/08 12:56 PM
happy

d4tc's photo
Tue 06/03/08 01:01 PM
Niceeeee. drinker

no photo
Tue 06/03/08 01:06 PM
Edited by Unknow on Tue 06/03/08 01:08 PM
The pain the hurt
the names the dirt
she falls to the floor
she cant take it anymore

weak and alone
cant bear the pain
she takes a walk
in the rain

in the dark nights shadow
she walks and walks
not a word just silence
she never talked

thats where it ended
she took out the knife
she had no reason
no worth no life

they said they were sorry
they didnt realise
no-one could see
the painn beyond the smile

they grieved of her loss
the story of pain never told
she lived her desperate life
a fragile soul

Hope you don't mind me jumpin in and adding this!!drinker


calmguy3's photo
Tue 06/03/08 02:06 PM

The pain the hurt
the names the dirt
she falls to the floor
she cant take it anymore

weak and alone
cant bear the pain
she takes a walk
in the rain

in the dark nights shadow
she walks and walks
not a word just silence
she never talked

thats where it ended
she took out the knife
she had no reason
no worth no life

they said they were sorry
they didnt realise
no-one could see
the painn beyond the smile

they grieved of her loss
the story of pain never told
she lived her desperate life
a fragile soul

Hope you don't mind me jumpin in and adding this!!drinker




Very well done
I'm thinkin this piece could use
it's own page
I sometimes worry
for those who find
a strange glamour
in this fragile soul
and the path she chose to take
it's a choice i hope no one makes
My thoughts i know
are shared by many of you
Keep doing what you do
Because it's folk's like me and you
who are food/strength
for fragiles souls
we read about in the daily news

pkh's photo
Tue 06/03/08 02:52 PM
flowerforyou bravo both of you

jimz's photo
Tue 06/03/08 03:36 PM
siic, that means cool in my nephews language. siic poem

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 06/03/08 04:31 PM
Very good write! flowerforyou

calmguy3's photo
Tue 06/03/08 04:51 PM

siic, that means cool in my nephews language. siic poem

This is probably the only time i don't mind being siic/sick