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Wed 05/21/08 08:10 PM
Love the twist

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Wed 05/21/08 06:45 PM
Amen

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Wed 05/21/08 06:43 PM
well done

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Wed 05/21/08 06:40 PM
Loved the originality

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Wed 05/21/08 06:26 PM
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow,
wrote in the last stanza of "The Two Rivers",...

It is the mystery of the unknown
That fascinates us; we are children still,
Wayward and wistful; with one hand we cling
To the familiar things we call our own,
And with the other, resolute of will,
Grope in the dark for what the day will bring.

I believe it is better to reach out to the unknown than to suckle the familiar. Or, perhaps better put by a modern writer...

The Invitation
It doesn’t interest me what you do for a living.
I want to know what you ache for
and if you dare to dream of meeting your heart’s longing.

It doesn’t interest me how old you are.
I want to know if you will risk looking like a fool
for love
for your dream
for the adventure of being alive.


It doesn’t interest me what planets are squaring your moon...
I want to know if you have touched the centre of your own sorrow
if you have been opened by life’s betrayals
or have become shrivelled and closed
from fear of further pain.

I want to know if you can sit with pain
mine or your own
without moving to hide it
or fade it
or fix it.

I want to know if you can be with joy
mine or your own
if you can dance with wildness
and let the ecstasy fill you to the tips of your fingers and toes
without cautioning us to
be careful
be realistic
remember the limitations of being human.

It doesn’t interest me if the story you are telling me
is true.
I want to know if you can
disappoint another
to be true to yourself.
If you can bear the accusation of betrayal
and not betray your own soul.
If you can be faithless
and therefore trustworthy.

I want to know if you can see Beauty
even when it is not pretty
every day.
And if you can source your own life
from its presence.

I want to know if you can live with failure
yours and mine
and still stand at the edge of the lake
and shout to the silver of the full moon,
“Yes.”

It doesn’t interest me
to know where you live or how much money you have.
I want to know if you can get up
after the night of grief and despair
weary and bruised to the bone
and do what needs to be done
to feed the children.

It doesn’t interest me who you know
or how you came to be here.
I want to know if you will stand
in the centre of the fire
with me
and not shrink back.

It doesn’t interest me where or what or with whom
you have studied.
I want to know what sustains you
from the inside
when all else falls away.

I want to know if you can be alone
with yourself
and if you truly like the company you keep
in the empty moments.

Written By: Oriah Mountain Dreamer



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Wed 05/21/08 06:13 PM

PS, forgot to ask, "where's your's ?"







I didn't offer one, becuase the challange wasnt a competition with me, but yourselves

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Wed 05/21/08 06:09 PM

For the most part I write about love but if you take some time and go back in time!!laugh laugh I also do COWBOY POETRY and God!!
Archives!!laugh laugh happy drinker

In your case I would challange you to do something other than any of the above. Although you write very well. The intention of my challenge is for you to challenge yourselves to go someplace different. We all tend to surround ourselves with what comforts us.

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Wed 05/21/08 05:59 PM

I awoke this day the deer outside my window Reminding me of the awesome wonders that make me glow My creator put his all into the beauty that surrouds me I shall never take for granted the things gifted by thee (Off the top of my head not a poet) might this be an example?


yes it is and you are a poet

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Wed 05/21/08 05:58 PM

I can't write about love, I can only write about that which I know. frown flowerforyou

Of course you can write about love. Love of a child, love of a car, love of a tree, whatever, just not love of a man or woman.

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Wed 05/21/08 05:54 PM

Untitled...

I met a Blue Preacher today
Saddened by other pastors
We talked over lunch
Breaking bread
Me
Sipping off an old tin flask
Him
Uncritiqueingly offduty
We
Eat chicken alfredo
Courtesy of Macaroni Grill

The pastor
Feeling blue
Asks me for a drink
Not to be a Saint
I stingily harbor the last sips
To help preserve his purity
And
My sanity
Like the cross around his neck
I say
This is my savior

I drink wine he says
Intrigued
I say
More then a few shots at work?
He grins

He looks around mischeviously
As if his face was surrounded by darkness
Then he raises his left sleeve
I see a cross on his forearm
He says
This was what I beleived in
He then raises his other sleeve
He says
This is what I used to believe in
A little red man with a pesky tail and sharp horns
Laughing with black bottle in hand
Three red X's on white label

I say
We all have our own vices
So you like to drink?
I do he says
with his chin up

I say
I don't understand
You are a pastor

I'm a blue pastor
He says

Sympathetically
I give him a drink

The swig loosens his morales

Then he speaks to me in rhyme


I am a blue pastor
I have seen it all
I learned to walk
Before I could crawl
I'm not here to judge
For I have done my wrongs
But I'm a better man today
Much more strong
I have been to hell and back again
And what a trip that was
I have had it all before the fall and
tried almost every drug

He pauses

I pass him the bottle

When I was a kid
I had no fear
Beer was my first joy
When everthing felt wrong
And God felt gone
A bottle is what I enjoyed

So I tell the pastor don't live in your past
And now check me out I'm preachin
I take the time to put it in rhyme to exercise my demon

Ok Blue Pastor
I see your point

He cuts me off and asks
Do you have a joint?

I laugh and say no
Let's talk about this
Jesus helped his disciples
Netting the fish

This bottle a net
Kidneys The fish
Are you sure
You really
Want to do
This?

He puts the flask to his lips
And starts to think
Hmm, put his down?
Or have a drink?

I say no pressure
Drink away your sorrow
But wake up hung over
And you will hate tomorrow

He throws the bottle at me
And says forget it

I say, this isn't for everyone
I knew YOU would regret it.




Loved this, have we met? lol

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Wed 05/21/08 05:52 PM

Time Table

1958:

The dining room table at my house back in Maine, set
with streaks of morning sun and fat plates with wheat
pancakes, their bitterness offset by cloying maple syrup;
My brother and I sat on stacked cushions to reach its top.

1978:

Cards over the worn faux wood surface: Poker, Solitaire,
and spoons on the floor. I don't remember who won each game.
His ring once ticked the wood, slapping down, with bad aim,
an ace; we laughed and I pushed back my brown hair.

2008:

I smooth my fingers across the choppy tabletop as we
laugh about a joke dad used to make and about the day
my brother broke the dining room window. The memory
of you came across my mind, somewhat dented by time.
_________________________________________________

I know it sucks; I wrote it rather quickly.

I loved it

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Wed 05/21/08 05:47 PM
very good.

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Wed 05/21/08 07:40 AM
Wed 05/21/08 07:37 AM
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Beautiful picture you have painted!



Overnight I thought about these words. I have come to think(I may be wrong) that many of the writers here only write about lost love or how wonderful love is or something to do with love. I agree LOVE is a great subject, but after reading many poems one one particular subject, the audience must be getting a rather limited interest in the writer.
So my idea is to challange all the writers in this forum to write one poem on any subject other than love pertaining to an adult relationship.Also, this challenge is to write on, a subject that you think nobody else will possibly think of.
You are all wonderful writers, I am interested in the many facets of you. Please try this. I believe you will produce some amazing pieces.

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Wed 05/21/08 07:37 AM

Beautiful picture you have painted!flowerforyou


Overnight I thought about these words. I have come to think(I may be wrong) that many of the writers here only write about lost love or how wonderful love is or something to do with love. I agree LOVE is a great subject, but after reading many poems one one particular subject, the audience must be getting a rather limited interest in the writer.
So my idea is to challange all the writers in this forum to write one poem on any subject other than love pertaining to an adult relationship.Also, this challenge is to write on a subject that you think nobody else will possibly think of.
You are all wonderful writers, I am interested in the many facets of you. Please try this.

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Tue 05/20/08 07:45 PM
Much time has passed,
in few years,
Much love and joy,
Much pain and tears.
Tears themselves,
They never hurt;
But, love and joy
Were much to short.
In years to come,
I'll be eager,
For love and joy;
But, pain does linger...

BluesPreacher

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Tue 05/20/08 10:38 AM
Edited by BluesPreacher on Tue 05/20/08 10:39 AM
God Bless and protect our sons and daughters at war. I was a Desert Storm Vet with the first Mr. Bush and I applaud your acts of patriotism, but remind you also,with a quote from, Ernest Hemingway "Never think that war, no matter how necessary, nor how justified, is not a crime."


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Tue 05/20/08 10:09 AM
Edited by BluesPreacher on Tue 05/20/08 10:11 AM
I wrote this one day when I was in the Navy. It was just before sunset in the middle of the mediterranean ocean. I was sitting alone on the fantail of the navy destroyer, that I was stationed on, having a smoke.
The water was flat as ice and there wasn't a hint of wind, as I watched one of Gods most beautiful sunsets ever, a huge whale eased up out of the water and just floated there along side of us and stared directly at me with his large, intelligent and very human like stare that seemed as though he wanted to say something to me. We,(Myself and the whale) just stayed there looking at one another for what seemed like a long time and then he calmly flapped one fin as if to wave goodbye and gave a small spray from his spout and slowly slipped away back into the depts. I was left with one of the most surrealistic feelings of my lifetime, and will never forget it.

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Tue 05/20/08 09:51 AM
Blue, grey, white haze;
Above a golden sea,
Smooth as ice,
Weaved like silk;
Clean and free.
Great mammal of peace;
Contently, touches the gold,
To speak to me.

He speaks of untouched nations,
Beneath the gold, deep in the sea.
Where schools of fish, learn of creation
And sea lions play, in the weeds.

He speaks to me, about the otter;
The joyous fun, he makes of water.
He tells me all about the dolfin,
And his great love, for the ocean.

Then, with a tear in his eye,
The mighty mammal waved goodbye,
And from his spout, came a spray,
That I hope,
Will never fade away...

BluesPreacher

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Tue 05/20/08 09:40 AM
Thank you all. This was written for my daughter.

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Tue 05/20/08 09:28 AM
Paper's on the porch,
As I walk out;
into the cold
To scrape the ice,
from the windshield,
Of my poor ol' run down Ford.
I'm off to work again...
And you're off to,
Another day of being bored..

I come home to a smile,
That I know,
Was made just for me;
And the love of two children;
Warm, sweet and free.
I wake up,
in my favorite chair,
And turn off the T.V.,
In the dark,
I wipe away my tears,
(Because, it was all just a dream.)

When I wake up, in the morning,
And look into your eyes,
This painful, lonely feeling,
It makes me want to cry.
I sit and light a cigarette,
And think that I should try...

Days pass,
I don't know how many they are;
Distance and Time,
Are much too far.
I want to lay down,
Sleep,
to never wake again.
Dream of a time,
When I held your hand.

BluesPreacher