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Wishful thinking...
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 Loved the feelings portrayed, Freedom, happiness, even if from a figment of our imagination. Sometimes pretending to be someone's girl has it's advantages. (sigh!)Kuddos to you for a great write!
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I just cannot sleep tonight,
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I just cannot sleep tonight,
I know the reason why... The feelings are undaunting, From the past, they chose to rise. I crave the feel of arms so real and feelings that are true, My body sees the urgent need To get so close to you. The feelings there They don't despair Without you so close by, It needs your touch It wants so much It almost makes me cry. When I close my eyes Your face arises My body starts to churn But if I go again Back to that den I know that I'll get burned. Back to pain of times long ago, That never will be there again Just to close my eyes, I will get a surprise, If sleep lets me have a turn! Melissa R. Thompson 2-5-2013 |
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Lonliness and longing, for the heart's true mate. Great write, I could feel the emptiness within.
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Ok I so I started this
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If I asked would you slowly remove one by one every article of clothing that prohibits my eyes from indulging in your naked beauty You see the thought of you dressed only in midnight’s light elegantly inviting me to play with your soul’s hunger tempts my thoughts I want to feel your kisses I want to feel your hands seeking and discovering my soul’s beautiful pain as your breath against my skin sensually dictates everything I do tonight So please tell me that if I asked would you slowly teasingly seductively remove every article of clothing that prohibits my eyes from indulging in your naked beauty Softly, walking, Not a word she tells him, As she slowly takes off her clothing, Piece by piece. Hoping he will forever be grateful of the heartfelt gesture She is giving him. Excitement surrounds her as his loving eyes gaze at her naked beauty. He takes her all in, in one long sweep. Slowly, he walks towards her. Taking her in his arms, He knows this is right. She has given the only thing She has, Her heart, for the night. Naked and vulnerable trembling at his touch she’s longed for this night for she loves him so much Sultry eyes belie emotions long held in each breath released in gasps as teeth bite down on lips ripe for the taking As she lay bare, body and soul Exposing to him her weakness He feels her tender heart in his And he tastes her delicate lips She feels his masculinity as it brazenly honors her beauty it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage as he takes her softly Inside her they’re held without escape his power to overwhelm makes no mistake as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers their submission to each other needs no words She feels his masculinity as it brazenly honors her beauty it’s as if his soul is full with a sensual rage as he takes her softly Inside her they’re held without escape his power to overwhelm makes no mistake as she claims his soul forever mixed with hers their submission to each other needs no words Moans escape And legs entwine. Forever, it seems, Entangled with time. A little touch here A little touch there, Engages such feelings That each would share. Thoughts are gone As time transcends, Magic feelings Rule this reign. The want,the need, That each one has, Can only be fulfilled As each one shares. They give into the powerful surge, As they unite, their feelings merge. Until they give it all they have. And, blasting rockets do emerge. They soar up to the heavens above, As each one wants and needs to love. They climb into the clouds it seems, As each one gives into the dreams. Of being loved with all you got. Those little touches mean a lot. |
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Thank You
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achievements
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Humans, always inquisitive, always searching for clues...Nicely done
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God's Debris
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Welcome, and nicely done. A touching poem of the power of God, instilled in the little things all around, and that we should see his power and grace in....Awesome
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The Fall
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Hopes and dreams lay inside each one of us, and your poem portrays this beautifully, with a beginning, a middle trail of thoughts, a wanting to hold onto, and an end.
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Ok I so I started this
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Softly, walking,
Not a word she tells him, As she slowly takes off her clothing, Piece by piece. Hoping he will forever be grateful of the heartfelt gesture She is giving him. Excitement surrounds her as his loving eyes gaze at her naked beauty. He takes her all in, in one long sweep. Slowly, he walks towards her. Taking her in his arms, He knows this is right. She has given the only thing She has, Her heart, for the night. |
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a look at those eyes
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The eyes are the windows to the soul.....they tell you so much....your write expresses a wish for answers in those eyes....short, sweet, and straight to the point. Nice job!
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You rocked my world...
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Great play on words, leading the reader to believe that it is something else, then whammy! The flu!Great ending!
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~ twice on sunday
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The flow of poetry must open at its own time, in its' own way. It must feel right for it to happen. I agree it is like an orgasm waiting to happen, once it starts, you cannot stop til it is finished, and oh those feelings are so alive then!
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Sentinels Feast
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The law of the jungle, and so, it would seem, between nature and man. Survival of the fittest, and oh, so hard to see.
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Painted Stars
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Awesome write. Silence is golden, or maybe the words never spoken aloud, are from the heart.
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I Promise
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The vows of the heart, beautiful and moving.
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The Jazz Club
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Very descriptive. I can see myself there thru your poem.
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Soaring
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Another awesome journey of life....
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I am... It is my escape, my business, my writing center, where I play my games, visit my far off family, friends, and work on web sites, Without it, I would have no business! lol
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Welcome! Your poem hits the nail on the head.
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Awe, life. How appropriate your poem expresses it, within the feelings of the two.
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